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OVER BLACK.

A child sings. His sobs render the words indistinguishable, but the melody is THE WELL IS A MIRROR, a Barizheise sickbed hymn.

1 INT. SICKBED OF THE EMPRESS CHENELO - SUNSET 1

Dark sky gives way to a sickle moon. The BREEZE BLOWS gauzy curtains across the field of view.

Candles sit on the windowsill, wicks barren.

The silhouette of an eight-year-old MICHE'MAIA (coltish and concerningly skinny) kneels before the bed of CHENELO ZHASAN (young, beautiful, and dying).

He bears the plaits of a child, a far cry from the Emperor he will one day become. It is fitting that for as long as he remains Miche'maia, his face must be unknown to us, for grief consumes his very being; renders him an inkblot on an unmarked page.

The words to THE WELL IS A MIRROR grow more recognisable.

Chenelo stirs.

CHENELO

Maia...

Illness has stolen much from her, but her eyes flick from her son's face to her own limp hand. He takes it.

MICHE'MAIA

I'm here, Mama.

Chenelo smiles, letting her head fall back to the pillows. Miche'maia takes up the hymn again.

After several bars, Chenelo has not blinked. She is no longer breathing. Miche'maia falters, a SOB interrupting the words.

He clutches at his mother with both hands and tries to continue the hymn, but grief wracks his little body. Quietly, the pianoforte picks up the melody, unadorned.

Gloved hands emerge from offscreen to drape a funerary veil over the still face of Chenelo Zhasan. The white lace is stark against the sickbed's mottled greys. Nominally, it declares the dead soul is under the emperor's protection. And it is less expensive than black.

1A INT. SICKROOM OF THE EMPRESS CHENELO - DAWN 1A

ISVAROË MAID

Your Grace... (IN BARIZHIN) you must let her go.

The sympathy of the ISVAROË MAID (half-Barizheise, late teens) has turned to frustration through the long night.

Miche'maia is curled up with his mother's corpse beneath her funeral veil in a tangle of stiff limbs.

ISVAROË MAID

Your Grace.

MICHE'MAIA

(in Barizhin)

No! They'll bury her wrong!

ISVAROË MAID

(in Barizhin)

An thou stayest, they'll do that anyway, and bury thee with her.

MICHE'MAIA

(in Barizhin, petulantly)

Good.

The maid heaves a sigh, then comes to the bedside, her figure blocking Miche'maia from view. The musical accompaniment adds voices, a sense of urgency. The funeral veil flutters. A struggle ensues.

MICHE'MAIA

(in Barizhin)

No! Let me go! Let me go!

2 INT. UNTHEILENEISE COURT - "ULIMEIRE" - SUNSET 2

XX NOTE THE ULIMEIRE MUST NOT LOOK LIKE AN ULIMEIRE, BUT 'AS' AN ULIMEIRE. PLEASE DIRECT ALL QUESTIONS TO MER OLVARA, FROM WHOM THESE WORDS WERE BORN. THANKEE -CAMB XX

The funeral of Chenelo Zhasan is a sterile affair.

Black-clad mourners loom around every corner. Their stark figures stretch up to the sky.

The Zhasan's body lays veiled upon a dais. Miche'maia's silhouette stands before her, hands now behind his back. He drowns in his mourning clothes, several sizes too large.

MICHE'MAIA

(in Barizhin)

U-Ulis keep thee.

As THE WELL IS A MIRROR begins a slow transformation from mournful to foreboding, Miche'maia is ushered along. The next mourner takes his place to recite their blessings.

VARENECHIBEL IV (fifties, unmitigatedly Imperial) looks on from across the room in all his finely-draped white-on-white brocade. A black armband is his only mourning wear.

3INT. HALL OF THE UNTHEILEIAN - NIGHT3

Looming before Miche'maia is a set of elaborately worked double doors in metal and glass, a masterwork of elven craftsmanship. They open weightlessly and in perfect silence. Miche'maia is ushered inside, towards——

4INT. UNTHEILEIAN - CONTINUOUS4

——his father, who peers down at Miche'maia from the throne of the Ethuveraz. He glitters in the light of several ornate oil lamps, his visage sharp as diamonds and the Ethuverazhid Mura heavy on his brow.

An attendant shoves the shrinking boy forward.

XX NOTE IN THIS SCENE AND PREVIOUS WE HAVE FOLLOWED CLOSE AT MICHE'MAIA'S BACK WITH A TROLLEY SHOT, BUT AT THE SHOVE, THE KAMERA SHOULD REMAIN STILL, MICHE'MAIA STUMBLING FORWARD TO APPROACH HIS IMPERIAL FATHER ALONE -CAMB XX

The musical accompaniment comes to a sudden stop. Varenechibel leans forward, face distorting as he comes closer to the lens. He coolly inspects his youngest son for a long and terrible moment.

Miche'maia fidgets under his gaze, head lowered.

VARENECHIBEL IV

Well?

MICHE'MAIA

(in stumbling Ethuverazhin, clearly memorised by rote)

H-hello, mer. You are a bless in up... upon our...

VARENECHIBEL IV

Enough.

(to the Imperial Secretary)

Send him away. With any luck, the wretch will take after his mother in more than just looks.

5EXT. UNTHEILENEISE COURT - MOORING MAST - NIGHT5

Clouds obscure the moon above the Court, a smear of faint light in the sky. Miche'maia's silhouette stands eerily still. Two faceless attendants stand on either side of him.

Musical accompaniment returns, the same foreboding interpretation of the Barizheise hymn for the dying. The adults shove Miche'maia towards the looming airship.

He ascends the steep staircase alone. Disappears inside.

The airship rises into the night.

6INT. AIRSHIP - NIGHT6

Miche'maia sits on a bench backing up against the cage-like divider between the airship's cargo hold and humble passenger compartment, empty space at either side.

Viewed from behind through the cage, we watch as he hugs himself tightly, rocking back and forth.

If the CABIN ATTENDANT (twenties, with a servant's crop) feels any sympathy for the sobbing child, it matters not. She averts her gaze.

7EXT. EDONOMEE - LANDSCAPE - DAWN7

The sun breaches the horizon. Airship meets mooring mast.

Closer now. A severe-looking man stands at the mooring mast. He remains perfectly still as Miche'maia is ushered towards him by his guardians.

He is SETHERIS NELAR (forties, sour, as well kempt as a drunkard could be). He frowns down at Miche'maia.

8INT. EDONOMEE - CENTER ROOM - DAWN8

Miche'maia sits at the window, watching the airship return to the clouds. The morning light pours in around him, leaving him still in silhouette. He remains at screen left.

Deeper in the lodge, Setheris stands before the great mantlepiece. The gloom of Edonomee threatens to swallow him whole. He keeps his hands behind his back as he approaches us, step by step, until——

KAMERA FLASH.

In the afterimage, SUPERIMPOSE: "THE BRIDGE BUILDER".

9EXT. EDONOMEE - LANDSCAPE - TIME LAPSE9

BEGIN TITLES.

Years pass by in seconds. The sky shifts in endless dawns and dusks.

XX NOTE REFERRING TO THE SUGGESTION MADE BY ASST. EDITOR LOREZHEN: IF AN IMAGE OF THE LODGE'S EXTERIOR WERE CAPTURED ONCE EVERY THREE DAYS, ONE COULD EASILY STITCH THEM TOGETHER TO SIMULATE THE CHANGING OF SEASONS. AT TWENTY-FOUR IMAGES EACH SECOND, A YEAR WOULD PASS WITHIN FIVE SECONDS. THEREFORE, ONE WOULD NEED A TOTAL OF TWENTY TO TWENTY-FIVE SECONDS FOR A CHILD IN HIS EIGHTH YEAR TO REACH HIS TWELFTH. -AIVO XX

KAMERA FLASHES light the windows from within.

Autumn clouds the sky. A small, dark figure on the steps can only be Miche'maia. The front door opens. Tall, pale Setheris GRABS his ward by the arm and drags him inside.

More KAMERA FLASHES. The world calms for a moment——only for a COURIER to approach the door.

PAUSE TITLES.

10INT. EDONOMEE - CENTER ROOM - NIGHT10

Setheris sits by the fireplace, letters in hand. There is an open bottle of metheglin, near-empty, and a crystal glass on the side table.

He glances up at the COURIER (twenty, pale and pretty).

One missive bears a seal that gives Setheris pause. We push closer in until the seal is all that we can see; it belongs to the Lord Chancellor, Uleris Chavar. He breaks the seal.

He reads under his breath:

SETHERIS

'By order of His Serenity Varenechibel Zhas the Fourth, the unseemly practice of photography has been banned within the Untheileneise Court and all Drazhadeise properties...'

His ears are flat, his lips thin. His hands almost seem to shake.

SETHERIS

(to Courier)

Art certain this is the only missive for us thou hast?

COURIER

Yes, Osmer Nelar. May we go now, Osmer Nelar?

Seen from the back with hair in a child's plaits, Miche'maia peers in on Setheris from the door to his room, unnoticed. Four years on, he wears the same mourning blacks from Chenelo Zhasan's funeral, now only a little baggy.

SETHERIS

Not yet.

He grabs for the courier's wrist, tugging the stiff-backed young man closer. His gaze alights on the doorway.

Miche'maia stumbles backwards in a fright. Over his shoulder, we see Setheris's sharp-eyed glare.

Miche'maia flees up the dilapidated staircase.

11 EXT. EDONOMEE - LANDSCAPE - TIME LAPSE 11

Lights are visible from Miche'maia's room and the sitting room. As the night goes on, Miche'maia's room goes dark. Eventually, the lights in the main room follow Setheris to his own room. The front door opens, the slim figure of the courier slipping out.

It is nearly dawn when Setheris finally snuffs his lamps.

RESUME TITLES.

Time quickens. Another six years in a matter of seconds, with nothing brighter than the gaslight in the windows. Winter looms over Edonomee. A servant salts the steps. An airship creeps into frame as we END TITLES.

12 INT. EDONOMEE - MAIA'S BEDROOM - LATE MORNING 12

Charts and diagrams litter the floor. Many are hand-copied and heavily annotated, others are original work. Multiple monographs of Hera of Urvekh' lay about in various states of openness, scraps of paper marking the illustrations.

A dark hand selects one of the volumes, trading the paper bookmark for a small, triangular block of wood. The hand tightens a woodworker's clamp, holding the book open to a complex diagram.

Our would-be dachensol's wrinkled sleeve is rolled up to the forearm, revealing a meadow of bruises, scrapes, and cuts. There is also the tail of a large, angry scar.

Our view widens. MAIA DRAZHAR (eighteen and bony as ever) sits cross-legged at the center of his paper nest. He works by window-light, a singular, slanted square of visibility in the otherwise suffocating darkness.

He holds a wooden gear in his hand. In the other, a dull and rusty file, which he uses to shape the gear's teeth.

Once satisfied with his progress, he holds the file in his mouth so that he might fit the wooden gear into a larger mechanism. Though incomplete, his device is a near-perfect replica of the diagram in the book.

With a finger, he pushes the gear in one full rotation. Its sisters turn in kind, and he smiles.

13 INT. EDONOMEE - MAIA'S BEDROOM - EARLY AFTERNOON 13

The light from the window has moved, and Maia with it. He flips through a monograph which is more mathematical formulas than words. His finger tracks down the page.

INSERT - 'The lunar display is again driven from b2. The train b2-c1+c2-d1+d2-e2 results in e2 turning with the period of the sidereal month (i.e. position of the Moon relative to the Zodiac). The subsequent gears in the train introduce no further multiplication or division, but introduce a quasi-sinusoidal variation in the Moon's motion at the period of the anomalistic month.'

MAIA

B-two less C-one plus C-two...

He scribbles some notes on scrap paper, gripping his pencil in a fist like a child.

INSERT -

He circles his result.

14 INT. EDONOMEE - MAIA'S BEDROOM - LATE AFTERNOON 14

Again, Maia has moved with the light. He hunches over his work, carefully engraving the face of his device——an astronomical calculator——to match the book's illustration.

Offscreen, the STAIRS CREAK furiously.

Maia closes his eyes and breathes, slow and careful. Perhaps Setheris will storm right past his room.

No such luck. His door opens with a SLAM against the wall. Maia flinches.

SETHERIS

Get dressed! Get dressed!

Setheris storms into the room. His hair is coming out of its pins. Dramatic circles line his eyes.

Maia drops his engraving tool, scrambling to his feet. Setheris grabs him and lifts him by the collar before he is even off the floor.

SETHERIS

Thou lookst a foundling, boy. Hast never bathed? Never combed? Goddesses!

He releases Maia, who looks down at himself, at his trousers and shirtsleeves and suspenders. They are the same mourning clothes from his childhood, patched several times over. The mismatched lengths of each garment betrays his change in height, yet fit perfectly at the hips and waist.

Setheris tears a jacket from the broken wardrobe and throws it at Maia, hanger and all.

SETHERIS

Shoes! Where are thy shoes, boy?

He tramples Maia's papers as he crosses to the bed, which he searches under in a panic. Maia can only stammer.

SETHERIS

Quickly! There is an airship at the mooring mast!

MAIA

Airship? Why?

A heavy accent marks each syllable. Despite ten years in the north with an elven guardian, he speaks as one who has spent his whole life in Barizhan——but not the Barizhan of reality. It is the Barizhan of wonder-tales from whence he hails, and his voice reflects that in its breathy, halting quality.

??? what
 

Setheris pulls a pair of shoes out from under the bed. He throws them at Maia, who is still putting on his jacket.

SETHERIS

How should I know? Idiot.

He stands and dusts himself. His hands are shaking.

SETHERIS

The last time an airship graced Edonomee, it dropped thee at my doorstep. Perhaps thy father has another bastard to be rid of.

With a sharp turn, he faces Maia, who flinches once more. This is the only power Setheris Nelar still has in relegation, and he basks in it.

SETHERIS

Keep thy chin high, boy. Such diffidence hardly befits an Archduke.

The flank of a crooked finger under Maia's chin punctuates the order, forcing him to raise his head. Maia opens his mouth to reply, but cannot find the words in time.

SETHERIS

And for both of our sakes, hobgoblin, do not speak!

Defeated, Maia closes his mouth. He nods.

This satisfies Setheris. He pushes Maia out the door. Maia gives the room one last look; his papers have been stepped on and his device remains incomplete.

15 INT. EDONOMEE - FOYER - LATE AFTERNOON 15

An EDONOMEE SERVANT opens the door. Enter Imperial courier CSEVET AISAVA (twenty-five, charming in a homely sort of way) with a bow. Despite his somber expression, his face is a bright spot against the dark sky of Edonomee.

AISAVA

News from the Court.

The servant steps back to allow him in. Aisava's first steps into Edonomee are hesitant. He looks up the length of the walls, at the numerous animal heads that have been stuffed and mounted.

A Pelanraneise Cormorant stares back at him with wide, glassy eyes.

EDONOMEE SERVANT

This way, if you please.

The servant stands before the door to the center room, his face as haunted and severe as the decor.

Aisava offers him a nod. He follows.

16 INT. EDONOMEE - CENTER ROOM - LATE AFTERNOON 16

The door to the center room swings open. The servant enters, followed by Aisava.

Very little change has graced the room since Miche'maia's arrival. Perhaps there are a greater number of cobwebs.

Maia and Setheris are already here. Maia would be taller than his guardian, were he permitted to stand. Instead, he sits with his hands clasped in his lap. Setheris stands behind him, a hand placed decidedly on the chairback. They are framed by the great, antlered firescreen of Edonomee.

Aisaiva's eyes go wide. Setheris coughs.

SETHERIS

Well?

AISAVA

(to Maia)

Are you the Archduke Maia Drazhar, only child of Varenechibel the Fourth and Chenelo Drazharan?

Maia looks up at Setheris. He was told not to speak.

Suspicion prickles Setheris's otherwise practiced countenance. He gestures for Maia to answer.

MAIA

Yes?

To the separate horrors of both Maia and Setheris, Aisava falls to his knees. He is the first to prostrate himself before Maia Drazhar, but he will not be the last.

AISAVA

Your Imperial Serenity.

Revelation dawns on Setheris Nelar.

When Aisava does not stand, Maia looks to Setheris. Finding no reaction, he takes a gamble and kneels beside Aisava.

MAIA

You bring us letter, yes? Very kind. Please, we read together.

Aisava cannot bring himself to touch an emperor, even an unwitting one.

Maia, accustomed to certain treatment by the household at Edonomee, presumes another source for his reluctance. He shows Aisava his palms, then the backs of his hands.

MAIA

Clean, see?

SETHERIS

(to Aisava)

We'll have to get through this one way or another, won't we? Up on your feet, then, courier.

At last, Aisava accepts the proffered hand. The smile Maia gives him is weak, but genuine.

Once all are standing, Aisava takes the letter from his leather bag. He looks to Maia.

AISAVA

Would you like to——to...?

Maia looks to Setheris again. It has never been his place to read letters. His smile weakens further.

SETHERIS

Just read it.

AISAVA

Right.

(he clears his throat)

'To the Archduke Maia Drazhar, heir to the imperial throne of Ethuveraz, greetings in this hour of greatest grief. Our name is——'

Aisava's voice slowly shifts into that of another.

IDRA (V.O.)

——Idra Drazhar, and we are your nephew.

DISSOLVE TO:

17 EXT. UNTHEILENEISE COURT - MOORING MAST - DAY 17

IDRA DRAZHAR (fourteen, the very image of an imperial Prince) looks on as his grandfather, VARENECHIBEL IV, approaches the airship WISDOM OF CHOHARO, followed by his NOHECHAREI, Idra's father NEMOLIS, uncles NAZHIRA and CIRIS, and the remainder of their retinue.

Idra calls out to his departing relatives, waving his farewell. His father turns, smiles, and waves back.

IDRA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Our grandfather His Serenity Varenechibel the Fourth, our father Prince Nemolis, and our uncles Archduke Nazhira and Archduke Ciris passed away earlier today when their airship crashed whilst returning from the wedding of Prince Orchenis of Thu-Athamar.

18 INT. AMAL'THEILEIAN - AFTERNOON 18

The royal wedding. Newlyweds PRINCE ORCHENIS and ULEVIÄN CLUNETHARAN (neé TETHIMIN) approach Varenechibel. Both are veiled in shimmering sharadansho, wrists and ears dripping princely cats-eye and polished elesth beads. They bow. With the nod of his head, the whole of Varenechibel's retinue bows back.

XX NOTE WE WILL OF COURSE FIND NO SYMPATHY FROM THE AMAL-ATHAMEISE PRODUCTION BOARD SHOULD WE REQUEST TO FILM IN THE AMAL'THEILEIAN. WORSE, WE MAY ENCOUNTER THE AUTOGLORIOUS DILETTANTES WHO CALL THEMSELVES KINEMEISEI, AND THEY ALWAYS HAVE ADVICE. AFTER A CONVERSATION WITH MER OLVARA'S SECRETARY, WE BELIEVE THAT THE SET OF THE ULIMEIRE——OR RATHER, THE SET OF THE ROOM THAT IS 'AS' AN ULIMEIRE——MAY BE FIT FOR REUSE. AIVO, WHAT THINKST TYOU? —CAMB XX

an thou findst it acceptable
we take no issue x

19 EXT. CRASH SITE - MIDMORNING 19

Archival footage from the aftermath of the HEART OF THE MERVANENS DISASTER: twisted metal, a field aflame.

IDRA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

The Lord Chancellor, Dach'osmer Uleris Chavar, gave his condolences to our person and then began immediately to speak of plans for our coronation as Varenechibel the Fifth.

20 INT. PRINCE'S APARTMENTS - IDRA'S ROOM - LATE MORNING 20

A finely dressed man who can only be ULERIS CHAVAR prostrates himself before Idra.

Idra clasps his hand to his mouth, collapsing to sit on the chaise behind him. He is a puppet with its strings cut, and indeed, a puppet is what Chavar desires him to be.

IDRA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

This greatly unsettles us. The Elflands are rightly yours, and, selfishly, we recognise that we are but fourteen years of age. We know well the fate of the past Michenzhasai.

A wider angle reveals the news of his father's death comes in the sitting area of Idra's bedroom. Though the hand at his mouth bears a platinum signet ring, it is still undoubtedly the bedroom of a child.

The desk is stacked high with textbooks, a history essay half written. The bookshelves hold brightly-bound adventure novels with alliterative names. There is a bokh set untouched on the table between two armchairs, whilst a board-game with dice and colorful game pieces sits unfinished on the floor, ringed by three pillows.

IDRA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

We fear at best Chavar is such a bigot he would see you stripped of your birthright, and at worst seeks to use this terrible tragedy to personal gain, placing himself as our regent before most likely disposing of you and I both.

Idra collects himself, blinking back tears. He squares his shoulders and speaks to Chavar.

We cannot hear the words, but their body language makes clear their conversation has quickly become an argument.

Chavar is domineering and condescending; Idra grows increasingly upset and frustrated, showing the raw emotion he is too well-bred to express in a letter.

IDRA

(inaudible)

Our father has just died, and you cannot spare us an hour to mourn him? The coronation can wait! The naming of a regent can wait! Now get out.

Chavar obeys.

IDRA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

We have requested Chavar keep secret the tragic loss to our nation for another day, nominally to give us time to grieve our father in private. We do not think he suspects our true intentions.

Finally alone, Idra is wracked with sobs, hiding his face in his hands.

His chest heaves. His hands shift: still covering his mouth and nose, but we may now see his eyes, screwed tightly shut.

Another shaky breath. His clasped hands fall to his lap, elbows braced on his knees.

He forces himself up, and takes a seat at his desk, pulling out a fresh sheet of paper. He flicks the switch on the gas-heated wax warmer, then begins to write.

IDRA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

We beg you come at once to the Untheileneise Court to claim your birthright, and, selfishly, to help us.

21 INT. PRINCE'S APARTMENTS - IDRA'S ROOM - CONT'D 21

The letter, now written, is folded carefully in thirds and placed in an envelope.

Idra pours a bit of the melted wax on the seam of the envelope, uncertain how much he needs for the seal. Slips the ring off his finger to press it into the hot wax.

His signet is a sleek cat depicted in profile, gracefully mid-stretch.

IDRA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

We have no one else in whom to put our trust.

22 INT. PRINCE'S APARTMENTS - DRESSING ROOM - NOON 22

Idra sits atop a velvet stool, swathed in mourning blacks. Hands come from offscreen to comb, twist, and pin his hair into place. His grey eyes stare off into the distance.

With the last amber-headed pins in his delicate white hair, the EDOCHARIS (elven, late teens) bows to Idra, seen behind him in the mirror.

Idra twists to face the edocharis, reaching for his arm. Desperation is writ plain on Idra's fine-boned face.

Their brief conversation we watch from Idra's back, symbolically emphasizing his youth. The sealed letter passes from Idra to the edocharis, who bows once more.

IDRA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Our edocharis, Lanis, will await your airship's arrival, so we may meet at once and approach Dach'osmer Chavar as a united front.

23 INT. PRINCE'S APARTMENTS - DINING ROOM - NOON 23

The same shot at Idra's back, now alone at his luncheon. He picks at his food. Rack focus to a massive portrait of Varenechibel IV surrounded by his three elven sons in the background. A guard in Drazhadeise livery stands before it, watching the young prince like a hawk.

IDRA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Yours humbly and faithfully——

24 INT. EDONOMEE - CENTER ROOM - CONT'D 24

AISAVA

'——Prince Idra Drazhar.'

XX NOTE AIVO YOU GENIUS. YOU WILL HAVE OUR JOB FROM US SHORTLY WE FEAR. MANY THANKS FOR RESCUING THE MONTAGE FROM A RATHER SORRY STATE —CAMB XX

 
thankee x

Silence consumes Edonomee.

Setheris stands with his knuckles pressed to his mouth. Aisava can do little more than hold the letter.

Maia glances between the two of them. His face is a portrait of fear, of uncertainty. At last, he speaks:

MAIA

We are——we are sorry, we...

Aisava nods, spurring him to continue——and earning a groan from Setheris.

SETHERIS

We fear His Serenity has not understood a word. Isn't that right, boy?

Maia ducks his head, effectively silenced.

SETHERIS

He came into our custody without a word of his father's tongue——nor the wits to string two thoughts together. Shameful.

AISAVA

That——that rather beggars belief...

SETHERIS

Does it? Watch.

(with his voice raised)

Your father! Is dead!

Maia's whole body is strung as tightly as by a violineisa. His instinct to flee clashes against the presence of a guest.

SETHERIS (CONT'D)

Your brothers! Are dead! You know who that leaves, boy? Tell me!

No response, not even a flinch. It's like shouting at a statue. Maia's eyes are fixed to the floor, eerie silver unblinking.

Aisava winces.

SETHERIS (CONT'D)

You! It leaves you! Ethuverazhid Zhas in all his glory!

He descends into a FIT OF LAUGHTER. It doubles him over, forces his long-jailed body to shake.

XX NOTE THE FOLLOWING DIALOGUE WAS ORIGINALLY WRITTEN IN BARIZHIN RATHER THAN MERELY NOTED AS SUCH. OUR THANKS TO OUR MOST VENERABLE PRODUCER OSMER KHENAR FOR REMINDING US THAT THERE ARE THOSE WHO STILL VALUE THEIR ELVEN HERITAGE ABOVE MUTUAL CLARITY —CAMB XX

MAIA

(quietly, in Barizhin)

It is the same word. 'Dead'.

If Setheris hears this, he is too overcome with his ill-placed mirth to react.

Aisava, meanwhile, recovers from his own increasing horror long enough to return the earlier gamble with his own:

AISAVA

(in Barizhin)

Airship. Of— er... from sky. Fell.

Though his command of the language is far from expert, it is enough. Maia's eyes widen. He makes a warding gesture.

MAIA

(in Barizhin)

It crashed? Truthfully? They're all dead?

Aisava nods.

AISAVA

(in Barizhin)

Yes, yes, most truth. Father, brother——you know. Er. Son to brother says... home. Please.

By this time, Setheris has regained himself enough to shake his head. Whatever composure he had before, it is gone from him; that is to say, he is drunk. He has been drunk.

SETHERIS

Commendable try, Mer Courier, but it will do you no good. That Sevrasechedeise blood breeds true: He is a cretin in any language.

A grimace from Aisava.

SETHERIS

You seem a sharp one. We would not see your wits wasted on he who has none.

He puts a hand to Aisava's back.

SETHERIS (CONT'D)

Come. Strategy will be our only weapon in this battle. We would like to know more of what has developed during our absence from Court. Won't you join us?

It is not a question. He pushes Aisava towards the stairs.

MAIA

No.

Setheris stops cold. He turns. Slowly.

SETHERIS

No?

He stalks forward. Nose to nose, still Maia holds his ground. This only further enrages Setheris. He now stands directly between Maia and Aisava.

SETHERIS

And who art thou to tell me no, boy?

For all that he shakes, Maia Drazhar does not budge.

MAIA

Zhas.

Setheris stares. His eyes threaten to bulge forth from his skull. On instinct, he raises a hand——

Maia's eyes shut tight.

But Setheris does not strike. He cannot, not yet. Instead, he flicks his wrist in a flourish that resembles, but is not, a bow.

SETHERIS

Serenity.

With that, he straightens himself, and marches from the room. He very nearly pushes Aisava over on his way up. The stairs CREAK with each step.

Once Setheris is gone, Maia exhales. He appears on the verge of collapse. Still, he manages to put on a polite, if awkward, smile.

MAIA

We are... sorry. For yelling.

AISAVA

No, it's quite——

MAIA

(in Barizhin)

His wife writes to him. When letters come...

(in Ethuverazhin)

...the couriers, he...

He knows the words——they are simply too cruel to say aloud.

AISAVA

He hurts them?

Carefully, Maia nods.

AISAVA

In that case, you have our thanks, Serenity.

The bow he performs here is genuine. Partway through, he looks up at Maia and offers him a smile.

25 OMITTED 25


26 OMITTED 26


27 INT. UNTHEILENEISE COURT - RECEIVING ROOM 27

The Emperor's receiving room is smaller, warmer than the rest of the court——but no less stately.

Idra, attended by a GUARDSMAN, has perched himself at the secretary's desk. His posture is impeccable. He keeps his hands firmly in his lap, the closest he is permitted to fidgeting.

Sound of the door to the receiving room as it OPENS. Idra's gaze flies to up to see:

The edocharis leads Maia, wide-eyed and painfully thin, into the room. Csevet follows close behind, then Setheris.

IDRA

Uncle!

Idra leaps forward. Gone is the prince of mere moments ago; now he is but a grieving boy who has just laid eyes on one of the few family members still alive.

His arms wrap around Maia's slight frame. Maia, who has faced naught but the lash since the death of his mother, stands stiff. He pats Idra's shoulder.

Setheris grimaces.

IDRA

Uncle Maia, it heartens us to see you safe! We waited and waited for your airship to come, we could not bear the thought of another crash, we couldn't——

He stops short, tears visibly forming at the edges of his eyes. He stares up at Maia, at that same apologetic smile shown to Aisava earlier.

IDRA

Uncle? Is... is aught amiss?

It is Aisava, thankfully, who steps forward.

AISAVA

Prince Idra. Regrettably, His Serenity was never taught Ethuverazhin.

SETHERIS

(defensively)

He cannot be taught.

MAIA

We understand little bit.

Maia falls silent, and Aisava clenches his jaw. Cold, quiet fury builds behind the mask of his professionalism.

SETHERIS (CONT'D)

For ten years, we have laboured beneath the yoke of this impossible task——

The prince returns. He has pinned Setheris beneath the authority of his gaze and taken his measure thoroughly.

IDRA

We think it best you leave us, Osmer Nelar. Perhaps you should see to your household, now that you have returned from relegation.

For ten years, Setheris has held absolute power at Edonomee. Whatever he once knew of elegant compliance was lost long ago. He recognises this and, in an act of self-preservation, bows his head.

SETHERIS

Yes, Prince Idra. We thank you, Prince Idra.

IDRA

Good.

(to Aisava)

We would have our uncle understand us, and to feel understood in turn. Know you of any who might serve as our interpreter?

Setheris stalks off towards the entryway of the receiving room. He is hunched over, his ears lower than he perhaps realises. A thought strikes him.

AISAVA (O.S.)

It will be done, Prince Idra.

Setheris turns.

SETHERIS

(dryly)

Not so fast, Mer Courier. This is the Ethuverazhid Zhas, remember. You will need a Witness vel ama to speak on his behalf in any matters of state. Know you any goblin prelates?

Neither Idra nor Aisava possess a timely response.

SETHERIS

We will be with our wife.

He leaves.

SETHERIS (O.S.)

Ah, Chavar. Wonderful. Now the hobgoblin can be your problem.

Like chastised schoolboys, Idra and Maia share an anxious look and straighten. They are out of time.

The door OPENS.

IDRA

Lord Chancellor.

CHAVAR

Serenity... Prince Idra. We beg your pardons for the confusion earlier today. We were... misinformed as to the matter of succession in the case of the emperor and crown prince passing away simultaneously.

Chavar is a consummate politician, smooth as an eel. If he holds any concern of whether the excuse he’s about to deliver is plausible enough to stand between him and the sunblade, nothing in his face betrays it.

CHAVAR (CONT'D)

Had Prince Nemolis survived His Serenity even briefly, it would have been you, Prince Idra, who inherited the throne. And this morning it was still unclear if in fact he had. No slight was intended, of course.

IDRA

Of course.

(to Maia)

He says 'it was a mistake, sorry'.

Maia acknowledges this with a raise of his brows, but keeps his mouth closed and countenance neutral.

Chavar looks between Idra and Maia, taking their measure. He turns to Maia and finally bends a knee.

CHAVAR

We offer our sincerest apologies for the numerous indignities Your Serenity has already been made to suffer so early in your reign.

He knows what he is doing; there is no question of it.

CHAVAR (CONT'D)

Including the indignity of travelling to court by airship. Had we the chance to arrange things, we would have secured Your Serenity a much safer mode of transportation. A proper imperial caravan would have——

MAIA

Safer? Airship very safe. Or... we understand wrong? You say many word.

Chavar does not have a response to this.

MAIA (CONT'D)

Horses? Very beautiful——but careful! Horse is scared, horse runs. Easy injury. Horse kicks? Easy injury. And many horse all at once? Terrible. Many horse, many danger.

He speaks increasingly quickly, anxiously. He expects to be cut off, and is thrown by the fact he hasn't been already.

MAIA (CONT'D)

But airship? Oh, yes. One engine fails, is possible. But engines are many. Hole in material is possible, and traveller is scared. But most time, falling is slow! And michenballons make slower. Yes, airship very safe!

CHAVAR

...Perhaps ordinarily that is true. But surely, given the circumstances, Your Serenity would have preferred not to take such a risk?

IDRA

'Given the circumstances'? Forgive our asking so bluntly, Lord Chancellor, but do you mean to suggest the crash was the work of an assassin?

CHAVAR

Surely not!

Chavar, so cool and unbothered mere minutes ago as he excused an act of what seemed to be willful treason, splutters. A guilty man's defensiveness, or a loyal servant of the Elflands's horror at an unthinkable proposition?

CHAVAR (CONT'D)

The tragedy of the situation cannot be understated, but it is just that: a tragedy. Whilst His Serenity's apparent interest in our transportion infrastructure is admirable, we find it wise to recall that airships do, on occasion, catch fire.

MAIA

Fire? Wisdom of Choharo is catch fire?

CHAVAR

(dryly)

It did not simply drop out of the sky, Serenity.

IDRA

It exploded.

MAIA

Exploded! No one say!

(to Aisava)

Why you not say?

IDRA

(in earnest confusion)

Does it matter?

MAIA

Matters very! Is wrong. Is needs...

(he struggles for the word)

Adbosekh. Looking...?

AISAVA

An investigation.

MAIA

Thank you. Needs aninvestigezhin. Wisdom of Choharo is heliösar airship. You see?

IDRA

Heliösar. The air part?

Being understood, even just this once, animates Maia.

MAIA

Yes! Is inert——means, 'not catch fire'. Is more safe, but more cost, is why many airship using eisonsar. An Wisdom of Choharo catch'd fire...

IDRA

...someone caused it to do so.

Maia nods. He looks to Aisava.

MAIA

Aninvestigezheisei, we see them when?

CHAVAR

Serenity! With all due respect! The task of appointing judicial witnesses is far below the seat of Ethuverazhid Zhas. We will see it done.

Maia and Idra trade uneasy glances. But if Chavar had any part in the killing of one emperor, a secret, unscheduled audience is not the place for the uncrowned successor and boy-prince to accuse him.

Maia inhales. Taking his cue from the imperial mien Idra shrugged on so easily with Setheris:

MAIA

Good.

IDRA

We sorely need a cup of tea. Where is the bell in here?

The question is largely rhetorical. He looks under the fine elesth table for a hidden switch——a stark reminder that Idra, though he may have been raised at court, is still out of his element, and still very young.

AISAVA

We will see to it, Prince Idra.

Idra nods assent.

Chavar is speaking again, but his WORDS BLEND TOGETHER. Our focus moves with Aisava as he exits the room. He closes the door behind him.

Steady view on the closed door; when it opens again, a SERVANT GIRL (thirteen, cropped hair) enters carrying an intricately cloisonné enameled teapot on a silver tray. Maia, Idra, Chavar, and Aisava now all sit around the table with assorted papers and empty teacups and plates at their settings.

Silently, the servant girl refills teacups and gathers finished plates.

MAIA

(mouths)

Thank you.

CHAVAR (O.S.)

...leaves the matter of the funeral. It would be wise to hold it as soon as possible after the coronation, lest Your Serenity be seen to dishonour the memory of your father and brothers.

On the sidelines, Idra holds his cup of tea in both hands. His father died this morning.

MAIA

Our father's memory. We... we wish honour, yes.

A KNOCK at the door. A DRAZHADEISE SERVANT opens it just widely enough to peek inside.

DRAZHADEISE SERVANT

Serenity. The Adremaza and the Captain of the Untheileneise Guard await without.

28 INT. CEREDADA APARTMENTS - DINING ROOM - EVENING 28

XX NOTE MANY THANKS TO MER OLVARA, WHO HAS ONCE AGAIN OUTDONE HIMSELF W THE NOTE 'THE ROOM MUST READ AS CSETHIRO ZHASAN, BUT NOT AS ZHASAN, AND ONLY SOMEWHAT AS CSETHIRO.' WE HAVE CHANGED THE BELOW TEXT TO THE BEST OF OUR ABILITY (AND PATIENCE)—CAMB XX

The world within the damask-papered walls of the apartments is lively at dinner-time. Though not lacking in elegance, the dining room possesses a good, clean warmth that we have yet to see on our screen. The table is bountiful with bread, cheese, and oil, and the family is full of bright, cheerful faces.

At the head of the table sits CEREDEL (late fifties, trembles when excited), who puffs with pride as he looks upon his five daughters. To his immediate left is CEREDARAN (thirty, visibly pregnant). She lays back in her chair, a cold, wet cloth pressed to her temples.

Moving clockwise, we see the YOUNGEST SISTER steal a crusty piece of bread from the plate of her sister, the ROSIEST SISTER, earning her a smack on the wrist.

Next is the ELDEST SISTER (nearly thirty, also visibly pregnant), who chastises the Rosiest. Her own husband, the BROTHER-IN-LAW sits across from her, bland and stiff. Then there is the second-born LOUDEST SISTER, who elbows her Brother-in-law to no reaction.

Finally, to her father's left is CSETHIRO ONE-DAY-ZHASAN (twenties, severe). Amidst the din, she sits with a copy of RIPOSTE: PHILOLOGICAL IMPLICATIONS OF THE PARRY IN EDREVENIVAR'S COURT in one hand and a fork in the other.

ROSIEST SISTER

It was mine first! She's the one who stole from me!

YOUNGEST SISTER

I would not need to steal if thou wouldst not hoard all the very best of the spread at the start.

ROSIEST SISTER

See? She admits it!

ELDEST SISTER

Please, let us be civil. We will have plenty to eat at the reception.

The Loudest Sister swirls her orchor around in its cup.

LOUDEST SISTER

An we are fortunate enough to still be awake by then.

BROTHER-IN-LAW

...Isn't that your second cup?

LOUDEST SISTER

Third.

YOUNGEST SISTER

I am soon to grow taller, Sister, I can feel it! Wouldst deny me a bit of bread?

ROSIEST SISTER

A bit of my bread!

ELDEST SISTER

Squabbling does not become thee, Dach'osmin.

YOUNGEST SISTER

Especially not on coronation day!

ELDEST SISTER

Nor does it do thee any favours, Michen. Now keep thy hands to thyself, or wilt attend the Untheileian with thy arms tied to thy sides.

CEREDARAN

Girls, please.

LOUDEST SISTER

(into her teacup)

'Girls'?

The Eldest Sister shoots the Loudest a warning glance. She's right, but perhaps it should not be remarked upon.

CEREDEL

Oh, a lovely day. An auspicious day, indeed. My wife at my side; my daughters all around me. Has any man been quite so fortunate as myself?

LOUDEST SISTER

Well, there is a certain Archduke about to receive a promotion...

ROSIEST SISTER

Canst not say such a thing!

(she whispers)

A man has died!

LOUDEST SISTER

(dryly)

Several, as I understand it.

CEREDARAN

Girls! Please!

CEREDEL

Must listen to your stepmother, girls. Death is a tragedy; I would not claim otherwise. But such talk is the talk of funerals! Today, we must speak of life!

He SLAMS his fist on the table for emphasis. The plates CLATTER. His wife winces at the sound.

LOUDEST SISTER

(to Csethiro)

Thinkst this table can handle any more 'life', Sister?

CSETHIRO

We are reading our book.

LOUDEST SISTER

Such coldness! And from my own kin. What fear'st thou?

CSETHIRO

Don't.

LOUDEST SISTER

Don't what? Dear, dear Csethiro! Do I sense that there is aught thou wish'st not to be uttered? A specific word, perhaps?

BROTHER-IN-LAW

(to Eldest Sister)

What, exactly, are we speaking of?

ELDEST SISTER

It is nothing, my darling. Eat thy croquettes and cream.

ROSIEST SISTER

Nothing? Oh, Csethiro! But hast the opportunity! It is not fair!

CEREDARAN

Might we please all quiet down? There is a long night ahead of us, and there will be plenty of time in the coming weeks to discuss the matter of Csethiro's eligibility—

CEREDEL

Ah, yes! Eligibility!

Csethiro's book SMACKS shut. She casts a glare towards Ceredaran, who in turn glares at Ceredel.

CEREDEL

Right. I see. Fear not, michen. The topic shall be cast far from my mind.

Slowly, the table falls into a stilted sort of silence. The Rosiest and the Youngest stare down into their plates, as if they themselves have been chastised. The brother-in-law opens his mouth——and thinks better of it as soon as he sees his wife. At last, Csethiro reopens her book.

CEREDEL

...Though it does seem a stroke of good fortune for thee to remain unspoken for.

ELDEST SISTER

Father!

LOUDEST SISTER

Surely we are all aware that Csethiro shan't be spoken for until she finds someone who can actually speak over her.

YOUNGEST SISTER

Then she really must marry the Emperor! Who else could manage such a task?

ROSIEST SISTER

Well I heard he doesn't speak.

YOUNGEST SISTER

What, not at all? Is he simple, like Archduchess Ino?

ELDEST SISTER

Michen!

YOUNGEST SISTER

I'm just asking!

ROSIEST SISTER

I don't know! Linaro's father works for Lord Chavar, and she said that he said that Edrehasivar didn't speak, and that they must learn to refer to Csoru Zhasan as Csoru Zhas.

CSETHIRO

Zhasanai.

She continues to make a great show of reading her book. Audible rustle of paper when she TURNS THE PAGE.

BROTHER-IN-LAW

Sorry——the emperor doesn't speak?

ELDEST SISTER

Darling. Croquettes.

CEREDEL

Wait! Don't tell me thou art on outs with Csoru again, michen!

CSETHIRO

An thou insist it.

ELDEST SISTER

Really Father, canst not truly believe she was ever 'in' with the Zhasan to begin with.

CSETHIRO

Zhasanai.

LOUDEST SISTER

I remember it like 'twere yesterday: Csoru on the floor, her tooth knocked clean from her face. Our sweet sister, rolling up her sleeve for another go. Sweet childhood...

CEREDEL

Didst what? When was this?!

CSETHIRO

'Twas only a milk tooth.

LOUDEST SISTER

Hm. Shame.

CEREDEL

And——and didst not think to include it in thy list of apologies? Csethiro, she is Zhasanai!

ROSIEST SISTER

Perhaps even Zhas...

CEREDEL

This could jeopardise thy eligibility! For all we know, Csoru Drazharan is telling His Serenity all about the villainous Dach'osmin Ceredin!

CSETHIRO

Father, I must beg thy sense of reason to prevail! The moment Csoru Drazharan realises that she has found someone yet unfamiliar with her tactics, she will lock herself in her apartments and refuse to say a word until he delivers the Dachen Mura to her doorstep.

CUT TO:

29 INT. UNTHEILEIAN - NIGHT 29

CSORU (twenty, dollish and doe-eyed) stands before Maia, her hands placed in his. She is in deepest mourning, like all the rest of the courtiers. Maia, draped head to toe in imperial white, is the only spot of brightness in the room.

CSORU

And though we shall carry this grief of ours to the end of our days; though we know that our life, our heart, our very soul is no longer ours to give——

A single, delicate tear rolls down her cheek. Still, her hands remain in place.

CSORU (CONT'D)

——we pledge all that is ours to you, Serenity. Long may the crown sit upon your brow!

The Ceredada watch the coronation from below. For a moment, all of Csethiro's sisters look to her. Her ears flick once in annoyance.

Back on Maia. A diaphanous white veil, pinned in place with tashin sticks, partially obscures his face—indeed, an elf would completely disappear in the sea of white—but his near black skin allows us a glimpse of a toothy smile and the crinkling of his eyes.

MAIA

(amused)

We think there is formula for oath, Zhasan.

XX NOTE WE RECOGNISE OSMER KHENAR'S CONCERNS REGARDING THE DIGNITY OF THE IMPERIAL PERSON, BUT FOR WHAT IT IS WORTH THE ARCHDUCHESS CHENO WAS KIND ENOUGH TO LOOK OVER THE SCRIPT AT A DINNER PARTY RECENTLY AND FOUND THE DASH OF DRY HUMOUR, INJECTED——WE REMIND——AT THE INSPIRATION OF HIS SERENITY'S OWN CORRESPONDENCE WITH CSETHIRO ZHASAN, HEARTENINGLY FAMILIAR —CAMB XX

CSORU

A formulaic oath cannot speak true to our heart, Serenity——but an you insist...

Again, to the Ceredada:

ROSIEST SISTER

What are they saying?

YOUNGEST SISTER

I think he fancies her. Must write that apology after all, Csethiro.

LOUDEST SISTER

Isn't that a Barizheise thing? I never finish those novels.

ROSIEST SISTER

Well Linaro reads them plenty and according to her the avarsin are always marrying their brother's widows and such. Imagine! One's sons would be cousins!

YOUNGEST SISTER

Bizarre. Think'st their baby will know to come out wrong?

ELDEST SISTER

Hush.

Close on Csethiro as she snorts.

She watches Csoru step down from the dais, oath given. The Archduchess NEMRIAN (nearly forty, delicate) approaches next. Her own oath is inaudible.

Close on Maia now. If he is nervous, his face does not show it——his face shows nothing at all.

Beneath the innumerable kerosene lamps strung across the high, trellised ceiling of the Untheileian, Maia's face is painted in soft, scattered light. It clarifies the gentleness of his features; casts exquisite shadows upon his skin.

LOUDEST SISTER

At least he is not bad to look at.

Csethiro startles. Her sister grins.

CSETHIRO

And how much did Father bribe thee to say so?

LOUDEST SISTER

Art stubbornness incarnate. I have eyes, Sister, that is all.

Up on the dais, Idra presents his sisters INO and MIREӒN (six and eight years of age respectively) to Maia to give their own oaths, their small figures silhouetted and draped in full black veils.

Maia's expression softens. He leans down just enough to let Mireän put her hands in his.

The Loudest Sister smirks.

LOUDEST SISTER

By the look of thee, hast eyes as well.

Chavar approaches his emperor and kneels before him, disdain undisguised. He lifts his hands to put them in Maia's, as he must.

CHAVAR

Your Serenity...

We see Maia's face, unreadable.

Then Idra's, mouth twisting in discomfort.

Then Csethiro, watching the dais with a rapt expression.

Then Csoru, whispering to the KINSMAN beside her.

When we return to Maia, disembodied hands are lowering the Ethuverazhid Mura onto his head. The bells of the Untheilemeire strike midnight.

A great CRY erupts from the crowd.

ANNOUNCER (O.S.)

Edrehasivar Zhas, seventh of that name.

Maia takes his seat on the throne of Ethuveraz. The crowd falls upon the floor in unison.

30 INT. UNTHEILEIAN - LATER 30

Music, now: a CHAMBER ENSEMBLE playing an energetic WALTZ. Their emperor crowned, the ceremony has become a party.

Dancing, CONVERSATIONAL BUZZ. Servants in Untheileneise livery proffer finger foods to celebrating courtiers.

As Idra ushers his young sisters away from their uncle, Csoru approaches the throne with a plate in each hand, one with an assortment of appetizers, the other stacked high with tiny, saffron-garnished rasgulla and nothing else.

The assortment, she offers to Maia.

CSORU

Here. You must be starving.

MAIA

Thank you, Zhasanai.

He holds the plate a bit awkwardly, and does not eat.

MAIA (CONT'D)

You make introduction?

Csoru's kinsman, seen briefly at the ceremony, remains at her side. THARA CELEHAR (thirty, as delicate and doll-like as his cousin) wears his hair in a prelate's single, sober braid. The devices of Ulis run along the neck and shoulders of his black frock coat in sharp, simple embroidery.

He prostrates himself.

THARA

Your Serenity. We are Thara Celehar.

CSORU

Our cousin is a Witness vel ama, Serenity.

(she smiles broadly)

And as it happens, he is fluent in Barizhin.

THARA

(in Barizhin)

We were raised in southern Thu-Tetar, near the Barizheise border, so we had the opportunity to learn——although 'fluent' is not the word we would use, and we know our accent is atrocious. Pray forgive us any mistakes, Serenity.

Maia nearly drops his plate. A nohecharis takes it from him, allowing him to lean forward.

MAIA

(in Barizhin)

The bells! Those that chimed at the moment of our coronation. They are part of a clock, yes?

Thara recovers easily from any confusion.

THARA

(in Barizhin)

Yes, Serenity. The clock, one could say.

MAIA

(in Barizhin)

Does it have a name? The great clock? Oh! But forgive our imprudence——'tis only we asked Idra earlier but could not make ourself understood. You are a blessing on our house. For all that it is ours, anyhow.

THARA

(in Barizhin)

Your kindness is a blessing on me. The bell, we know, is called Michen Raimeän, for the goddess of storms, but if the clock has a particular name, Serenity, we fear we do not know it. Would you like us to find out?

MAIA

(in Barizhin)

No, no, we suppose we ought not waste whatever time we have with you. It is limited, we assume.

THARA

(in Barizhin)

The Court does not look fondly upon men such as ourself, no.

MAIA

(in Barizhin)

Then that makes two of us.

Open alarm on Thara's face and ears. Maia raises a conciliatory hand.

MAIA

(in Barizhin)

Peace. We should not have spoken so freely. Bitterness becomes an emperor not. You speak of the impact of our late father's disregard for religion, yes?

THARA

(in Barizhin, nodding)

We do.

Csoru looks awkwardly between the emperor and her kinsman, unable to follow most of the conversation but mollified, at least, by the fact Thara's hackles have smoothed back down.

THARA (CONT'D)

(in Barizhin)

Ah, but the Zhasanai will want an answer to the question she is not permitted to ask. We have never witnessed for the living before, but as Witness for the Dead we took the same oaths as a Witness for the Emperor. We are bound to the truth, and to revethvoran should we forsake it.

MAIA

(in Barizhin)

It would please us greatly to call upon your service as an interpreter, Othala Celehar. And your accent is lovely, by the way. You must not apologise for it.

At the word 'Othala', Csoru must conceal her snicker in a bite of rasgulla. She recovers herself with grace.

THARA

(in Barizhin)

It would please us greatly to serve, Serenity.

He bows.

CSORU

We are delighted to see that you find our cousin's Barizhin comprehensible, Serenity.

MAIA

Is very good, very good. He teach you Barizhin, teach us Ethuverazhin, we be able to speak more in tomorrows. Yes?

Csethiro watches the conversation from a ways away. The sight of Csoru exhausts her enough on its own, let alone when she has so blatantly shifted her charisma into top gear.

Ceredel, on the other hand, notices Csoru at the Emperor's side and brightens. He passes his little plate off to the Eldest and hurries over to Csethiro.

CEREDEL

Come, michen. No better opportunity will arise!

He pulls Csethiro forward——she plants her feet.

CSETHIRO

Father, please! The man hasn't eaten for a day and a half. Look at him! He could faint at a moment's notice!

Ceredel leans in close and says, low and quiet:

CEREDEL

And if he were to swoon at the mere sight of my Csethiro, it would echo my own meeting with thy mother, may she rest easy.

He has called upon his strongest soldier. Both are well aware he intends to clobber her into agreement, but Csethiro cannot bring herself to deny him outright.

CEREDEL

Csoru knows thee. 'Tis as much a cause for introduction as any. If not for my sake, nor even for thy own, wilt not do it for thy mother? For a chance her daughter might bring a man to his very knees, just as she once did?

With pursed lips, Csethiro allows herself to be pulled.

Back with Maia and the Zhasanai, Thara points out the rough locations of where the great clock's inner workings stretch out across the entire room. An engrossed Maia watches on.

THARA

(in Barizhin)

...And there, Serenity, is the maintenance point for that particular cluster.

MAIA

(in Barizhin)

Magnificent! So well hidden!

Ceredel approaches from off screen, with Csethiro several steps behind. He clears his throat. All eyes turn to him. Once certain that he has the group's attention, he prostrates himself.

CEREDEL

Serenity. May we approach?

Thara clears his throat.

THARA

(in Barizhin, hushed)

Serenity. May we approach?

XX NOTE FROM THIS POINT THARA SHALL ECHO EACH SPEAKER IN BARIZHIN, EXCEPT WHERE SPECIFIC DIALOGUE IS GIVEN —CAMB XX

Maia looks to Thara and Csoru. Has this man not already approached? Nonetheless, he nods.

Ceredel returns to his feet.

CEREDEL

We wish to offer you our heartfelt congratulations. The coronation is no easy task. Rather, we do not imagine it as such.

Maia stares down at the Marquess. He has recovered the stony impassivity of an emperor.

This shift between demeanors does little for Ceredel's nerves. He flounders.

CEREDEL

Obviously we have not experienced it for ourself. Nor will we ever! It is an experience reserved for a very select few. Of which you are one, Serenity. Which is to say...

CSETHIRO

He wishes to present his daughter to you, Serenity.

Csethiro approaches, stiff and regal as any general. Her arrival elicits an elegantly arched brow from Csoru, but no remarks are made.

CSETHIRO

We are Csethiro Ceredin, third daughter to the Marquess Ceredel.

She, too, prostrates herself.

Maia betrays himself with a flick of the eyes. For the duration of a breath, his gaze searches for any place to land but upon her.

Csoru's features scrunch into something that could be construed as sympathy. It could be pity just as easily. Noblewoman that she is, Csethiro keeps her face towards the floor until Maia signals for her to stand. She does so with as much dignity as she can manage.

CSETHIRO

Thank you, Serenity. Now, if you will permit us our leave, we believe we have taken enough of your time already.

CEREDEL

Zhasanai! Zhasanai. You are the daughter of our dearest friend, yes? Brothers of the heart, we call one another.

CSORU

That is how you refer to one another, yes.

CEREDEL

And surely you recall that, er, that we sought to raise the two of you as...

CSORU

As sisters? We do not suppose we could forget it.

Ceredel's hands shake. He forces himself to smile.

CEREDEL

(to Maia)

We were taken in by Csoru Zhasanai's grandfather, you see, and her father considers himself to be our brother. We swear to you, Serenity, we did not approach you on mere acquaintanceship!

CSORU

Ah, the humility of the Ceredada. The Marquess understates the situation as always.

CSETHIRO

You would know a great deal of humility, Zhasanai.

THARA

(in Barizhin, hushed)

...our cousin says——ah, oh dear. 'The Ceredadeise humility'...

CSETHIRO

(tightly)

Actually, might we borrow our dearest heart-sister a moment?

She does not wait for permission before grabbing Csoru's upper arm and tugging her aside, though not so far away their hushed conversation cannot be partially overheard and vice versa.

This leaves Maia and Thara to converse with Ceredel. We overhear:

CEREDEL (O.S.)

...daughter seems to have forgotten herself.

MAIA (O.S.)

Apology is not needing.

CSETHIRO

We admit we are impressed, Csoru. We always thought thou hadst a remarkable acuity for tripping and falling upwards, but this is actually quite clever.

CSETHIRO (CONT'D)

Thy cousin an interpreter so thou canst whisper whatever thou wishest into His Serenity's ear? We know thou didst ever want to be a cat...

Csethiro's gaze dips to Csoru's signet ring.

CSETHIRO (CONT'D)

...but what a showing! Not three days and already thy claws are sunk deep the gossipmongers are proclaiming your imminent engagement. What a pity the honour shall come at the cost of the very last shred of thine.

CSORU

Our claws? Makest quite a statement, given the sharpness of thy tongue. But we suppose thou fanciest thyself in competition with us, given...

In unison, they glance at Ceredel.

CEREDEL

Indeed, Serenity. She is our late father's sister.

Csoru scoffs. She pops a rasgulla into her mouth and covers it with the back of her hand.

CSORU

(garbled)

Have him an thou likest.

She swallows.

CSORU (CONT'D)

We have no designs upon him. And Thara is far too much of a wet blanket to be of any use if we did. Ulis 'talks' to him in his dreams, he takes it all very seriously.

CSETHIRO

Playing the innocent suits thee ill.

CSORU

Is it so difficult for thee to believe we simply want to help him?

CSETHIRO

Yes!

A brief return to the gentlemen. Ceredel in the middle of a RAMBLE about riding, or opera, or some other diversion Maia——raised in destitute relegation——can only nod at in polite confusion.

Ceredel keeps glancing anxiously Csethiro's way.

MAIA

(in Barizhin, hushed)

Is something wrong?

He inclines his head towards the ladies.

Thara shakes his head.

THARA

(in Barizhin, hushed)

Later.

CSORU

...invited us along to the funeral for the crew of the airship. He's so earnest it hurts. He'll be dead in a month without us. And thou knowest we've always had a fondness for pathetic little creatures. Dost remember that poor bird thy dog savaged when we were girls?

CSETHIRO

The one thou took'st to the Csaiveiso? His Serenity is not a pigeon, Csoru.

CSORU

Of course not. He's a clever little cuckoo. Hast not noticed how he holds himself upon the dais?

Maia has yet to falter an inch. Ceredel, a lifelong courtier, fumbles all the more brilliantly in comparison.

CSORU

The very image of a father he met but once. The flock may not accept him, but surely dost recognise how they tuck the nest in around him.

As she says this, we look more closely upon the nohecharei, upon Thara and Aisava. The ring they form around him may be small, but already it is tightly wound.

CSETHIRO

Knowest as well as I that the Court is more cage than nest, Zhasanai.

CSORU

Ever the optimist, o 'heart-sister' of mine. Art a tragedy, I swear't.

CSETHIRO

This from a woman whose husband is not yet interred.

CSETHIRO

Mhm! I would know, wouldn't I? But come, we must rescue our Emperor from thy father. Unless——wishest to criticise me further?

Csethiro gladly would, under better circumstances. With a reluctant grimace, she follows Csoru back towards more pressing matters.

Back on the dais, Maia eats a raw quail's egg out of the half-shell as Ceredel carries on his one-sided conversation. He has barely touched the finger foods on his plate.

He nods and hums at appropriate moments, but absentmindedly. His eyes keep returning to Csethiro.

THARA

(in Barizhin, hushed)

...but doing so would decrease the profit margins of paper products and——Serenity, no one would pass judgment upon the decision to dismiss the Marquess, were you to make it. Least of all the Marquess himself, perhaps.

MAIA

(in Barizhin, hushed)

No, no. The man is nervous. We cannot possibly establish a precedent for casting a courtier aside for poor nerves alone, it would——Ah! Zhasanai!

Csoru glitters her way back onscreen and sinks into an elaborate bow. Csethiro, on the other hand, returns to her father stiff and scowling.

CSORU

Our apologies, Serenity. We regret to admit that we have not had time to meet with Dach'osmin Ceredin since... oh, it must have been just after our wedding day.

CEREDEL

(hushed)

Where hast thou been?

CSETHIRO

(hushed)

Worry not. I've returned.

CEREDEL

Serenity, we offer apologies on our daughter's behalf. The excitement of the day has affected us all, hasn't it?

With that, he bows. He looks to Csethiro, making the expectation for her to do the same as clear as he can.

Csethiro's posture remains rod-straight. She stares her father down, but he can only stand there, folded over, face blank. She returns her attention to Maia.

CSETHIRO

We thank you for your attention, Serenity. If there is nothing more you wish to say, we would gladly take our leave.

Maia searches his attendants for an answer. He finds just as much as Csethiro. He clears his throat.

MAIA

Yes. We... we allow.

Csethiro turns. There is a march in her step as she departs.

Her father bows one last time before running after her.

CSORU

Well! At least this was an accurate introduction to your courtiers.

THARA

Csoru. Unnecessary.

CSORU

We beg your most honourable pardon, 'Othala'. But are we incorrect?

Maia watches Csethiro and Ceredel reunite with their family. The Marquess's face has turned a rather impressive shade of scarlet. He practically falls into his wife's arms.

THARA

His Serenity has perhaps exceeded the number of ordeals that a person can undergo in a row. You could have intervened.

The Eldest Sister takes it upon herself to scold Csethiro. Ceredaran, despite being occupied with her husband, attempts to do the same.

CSORU

Intervene? With Csethiro? Quite a plan, Cousin.

Maia regards the Ceredada in unreadable silence.

The other Ceredinnoi now surround Csethiro, full of questions and exclamations and, most of all, opinions. Despite it all, Csethiro maintains her exceptional composure.

Csethiro catches Maia staring. They both turn away, quick as a child who has touched a hot stove.

31 INT. ALCETHMERET STAIRWELL - PAST MIDNIGHT 31

Maia and his train ascend the great spiral stairs in clockwise fashion. Though he keeps his chin high and shoulders level, he makes for a demure bride on this first night in what is now truly Edrehasivar's bed.

XX WE ARE AFRAID WE DO NOT CARE WHETHER THE ALCETHMERET STAIRWELL TURNS CLOCKWISE OR COUNTER-CLOCKWISE. WE DO NOT IMAGINE WE WILL BE PERMITTED TO FILM WITHIN THE ACTUAL STAIRWELL, AND EVEN IF THE COMPANY WERE GRANTED SUCH A MIRACLE, WE HAVE DECIDED THAT THE EMPEROR GOES CLOCKWARDS ALWAYS. UPWARDS, DOWNWARDS, SIDEWAYS——MAKE IT WORK —CAMB XX

32 INT. EMPEROR'S CHAMBERS - PAST MIDNIGHT 32

From a slight advantage, some ten or fifteen degrees above:

The three EDOCHAREI surround Maia. First they remove the jewels from his neck, his ears, his fingers. They then set to work on his braids, carefully removing all the little ornaments as they work.

Slow push in on Maia. He struggles to stay upright, let alone awake. His lids grow heavy. His eyes focus on something out in the distance, something beyond the audience's view.

Reverse. The great canopied bed——the site of his conception, of his father's conception, of his father's father's conception——looms before him. The nearby oil lamps cannot light it in full.

Once more, Maia is rendered a vague silhouette. With his hair half-braided and his face unknowable, it could just as easily be Miche'maia we sit with.

Shadows pool across Maia’s back. A hand creeps into view. Rack focus to Maia as his Edocharis undoes the topmost fastenings at the back of his neck.

KAMERA FLASH.

INSERT - Edonomee exterior.

SHUTTER.

Present Maia's face overlays the inserted image. His eyes widen.

KAMERA FLASH.

Extreme close on Maia's eyes. The silver of his irises drown out the image below.

INSERT - A figure sits beneath the hood of a late Varedeise wet-plate studio kamera. The figure's arm lifts the flash as a great victorious torch. Silver bleeds in from the edges in root-like formations that stretch hungrily towards Maia's irises until——

EDOCHARIS

Serenity?

KAMERA FLASH.

Maia INHALES. He chokes on air alone.

EDOCHARIS

Serenity? Are you well?

The fit forces Maia to double over. Slow zoom out as both edocharei and nohecharei flock to him.

33 EXT. ALCETHMERET - DAWN 33

Anmura joins wan Ulis in the sky above the Court, seen at an impossibly wide angle. The whole skyline behind the Alcethmeret is visible, yet we view it from eye-level in its entirety and nothing stands before it. Subtly, we rack focus from the rising sun to the towering minaret of the imperial residence.

XX NOTE THE MODULAR SCALE MODEL OF THE UNTHEILENEISE COURT DESIGNED FOR THIS PRODUCTION BY THE CLOCKSMITHS' GUILD OF LOHAISO IS A MASTERWORK, AND A GREAT MANY MURANAI WENT INTO ITS CONSTRUCTION——AT THE COST OF THE CGL, I REMIND. WE WOULD LIKE TO AVOID PAYING ANY OFFENSE TO THEM. FOR THE LAST TIME, WE ARE KEEPING THIS SHOT. -AIVO XX

34 INT. VERVENTHEILEIAN - MORNING 34

Maia regards the Witnesses of the Corazhas: BERENAR (sixties, grandfatherly), Witness for the Treasury; BROMAR (sixties, cataract), Witness for Foreigners; DESHEHAR (sixties, portly), Witness for the Parliament; ISTHANAR (fifties, anxious), Witness for the Universities; MADRINAR (fifties, faceless behind his mask of office), Witness for the Prelacy; PASHAVAR (seventies, venerable), Witness for the Judiciate; SONEVET ATHMAZA (fifties, Drazhadeise features), Witness for the Athmaz'are. All are elves of pure blood and noble birth——even Sonevet Athmaza, for while mazai judge themselves on merit, not birth, this courtesy does not extend to those who deal with them, and the Witness for the Athmaz'are is always chosen accordingly.

Every one of the Witnesses stares at Maia in return.

THARA

(in Barizhin, hushed)

They await your address.

MAIA

(in Barizhin, hushed)

...Of course.

(in Ethuverazhin)

Good morning.

No response.

MAIA

We... it is...

(in Aisava, in Barizhin)

Where is our Lord Chancellor?

AISAVA

(in Barizhin)

A good question.

(in Ethuverazhin)

Gentlemen, allow us to formally introduce ourself: we are Csevet Aisava, secretary to Edrehasivar VII. To our right is Thara Celehar, his chosen interpreter.

Now Thara is the target of seven silent gazes. PAPERS SHUFFLE and PENS SCRATCH as the Witnesses take note.

AISAVA

And now that you know who we are, we hope you will understand our confusion at Lord Chavar's absence.

The Witnesses RUMBLE with uncertainty——some with distaste.

PASHAVAR

Lord Chavar is occupied with the task His Serenity appointed him——the appointment of the Witnesses for the Wisdom of Choharo.

Thara finishes interpreting for Maia, who murmurs back a response.

THARA

And this task prevents him from completing the other duties of his station?

PASHAVAR

We cannot claim to speak for Lord Chavar, Mer Celehar.

Thara briefly stiffens at the title, but lets the slight pass over him. Again, a quiet translation and quieter answer.

THARA

His Serenity would see the day's business begun.

The room finds consensus for a first, perhaps final, time.

Time passes. Witnesses take notes, adjust their spectacles, stroke their chins in thought. The business of the Corazhas seems wrapped in endless ink and paper.

Several hours later, Aisava and Thara are on the edge of disarray; the latter's curls have started to free themselves from their pins.

Maia's posture has not sunk an inch: he remains unreadable and unyielding as a marble bust.

BERENAR

The available budget will only cover half that sum, Bromar.

BROMAR

Thankfully, His Late Serenity had your office draft a new budget to account for the lack. Or have you already forgotten?

BERENAR

We have not forgotten, but as you said, Bromar, the revision of the budget was the will of Varenechibel, and he did not sign the proposal into law before his untimely passing.

BROMAR

So? Have him sign it.

Bromar gestures towards Maia.

Maia says something to Thara.

THARA

His Serenity wishes to know why the Anmur'theileian across the Evresartha requires such a drastic increase in funds.

MADRINAR

We are at war with the steppe people, Serenity.

MAIA

(in Barizhin)

...Does he think we have never read a book? Don't say that.

(in Ethuverazhin)

Nazhmorhathverasheisei, yes.

MADRINAR

The—— (ASTOUNDED SCOFF) Perhaps you have heard, then, of how the Anmur'theileian is the sole line of defense between the raiders and your subjects in the badlands.

Madrinar is not the only member of the Corazhas taken aback by their emperor giving the People of the Night Sky a name which would seem to legitimise their claim to the Evressai Steppes.

BROMAR

Your father attempted to broker peace, but they refused all solutions——no matter the benefit.

Another aside between emperor and interpreter.

THARA

His Serenity would appreciate examples of these attempts.

BROMAR

Crop assistance, well-digging rights——we even tried to return their dead to them before it was discovered that there weren't really dead to return after all.

The translation startles Maia.

MADRINAR

Forgive him, he has forgotten the full details. For years, the steppes people claimed that we had stolen their dead from them. Your father ordered the Anmur'theileian to be searched——quite thoroughly, we might add——for remains that may have been stashed away during construction.

THARA

(for Maia)

So His Late Serenity believed there was good reason for the search?

BROMAR

Ah, yes, they have a habit of leaving the deceased up in high places, you see.

MADRINAR

For the vultures.

THARA

(for Maia)

And the Anmur'theileian was one such high place. Or had been one.

BROMAR

Yes, Serenity.

THARA

(for Maia)

...Meaning that, in essence, it was built atop their ulimeire.

MADRINAR

(dryly)

In a sense, Mer Celehar.

Thara's ears strain against the instinct to flatten.

MADRINAR

Ah! 'Yes, Serenity.' Slip of the tongue, you see.

Maia turns his attention from Thara at his left to Aisava at his right.

MAIA

(in Barizhin)

We can make no progress until we have seen the budget for ourself.

AISAVA

His Serenity will review the proposed increases once copies of the appropriate documents have been drawn up.

BERENAR

Our secretaries will handle it, if there are no objections.

BROMAR

None here.

MADRINAR

There are additional reports that would serve His Serenity to have. We will submit those as well.

MAIA

(to Aisava, in Barizhin)

Call for a recess. We are done.

AISAVA

Gentlemen, His Serenity believes that we are done for the day. We will reconvene according to the established schedule. Good day.

The Witnesses gather their papers and begin their exit.

Maia pays them no mind. He has eyes only for his stony-faced interpreter.

MAIA

(in Barizhin)

Thara? Art well?

THARA

(in Barizhin)

You cannot call us that here.

The sharpness of his tone strikes an unfortunate chord in the emperor's memory. Maia shrinks.

THARA

(in Barizhin)

...An it please you, Serenity, we would take our leave now.

Maia nods, and Thara evaporates into the crowd of quickly-exiting Witnesses.

Berenar lingers. He considers something for a moment, then approaches Maia with a resolute gait. He bows.

BERENAR

Serenity. If we may.

Without Thara, Maia appears several inches smaller. He glances at Aisava before straightening himself.

MAIA

Yes, Berenar?

BERENAR

We... would like to thank you. For sitting through that whole ordeal.

MAIA

No, no. Is duty.

BERENAR

Ah! So you do speak some Ethuverazhin, then?

MAIA

(grimacing)

Corazhas Ethuverazhin? No.

BERENAR

Ha. Yes, it really is a language of its own, isn't it?

The warmth in Berenar's smile does little to settle Maia's nerves. If anything, such geniality from an older man puts Maia ill at ease. Now he must wait for Berenar's true purpose to reveal itself.

BERENAR

Now that you have seen us all at our worst, it is only fair you should get to see... well, perhaps not at our best, but at least as people. (BEAT) We are hosting a dinner party at our apartments. An you are willing to join, it would please us greatly.

MAIA

(to Aisava, in Barizhin)

Dinner? Would the other Witnesses take this as a showing of undue favour?

AISAVA

(in Barizhin)

Ah... bad manners, would not be. If you want, can do.

MAIA

Hmm. Is not too fast? Your house will not be... unhappy?

BERENAR

Not at all. Our wife would very much like to meet you, in fact.

Cautiously, Maia brightens.

BERENAR

With your permission, Serenity, we would also like to invite the Archduchess Vedero.

MAIA

Oh! If she... if she wants.

BERENAR

We are sure she will be glad for an opportunity to meet you outside the Untheileian, Serenity.

CUT TO:

34AA INT. BERENADA APARTMENTS - OUTER VESTIBULE - EVENING 34AA

The ARCHDUCHESS VEDERO (twenty-eight, austere) is slightly taller than Maia. Though she does not possess their father's features quite as her brother does, her countenance is thoroughly imperial——as is the white-work embroidery on her gown.

Shoulder to shoulder, emperor and archduchess stare straight ahead.

MAIA

(hesitantly)

We are happy you come.

VEDERO

We are glad to do our duty, Serenity.

Thara, head and shoulders below the two Drazhada, MURMURS a translation. Maia's ears slowly fall.

MAIA

Of course.

The intricately carved elesth doors to the Berenada apartments swing open.

34A INT. BERENADA APARTMENTS - DINING ROOM - LATER 34A

Compared to those of the Ceredada, the Berenadeise apartments are somewhat smaller, less fashionable. The walls are papered in the caged birds and vines so loved by the empress Pazhiro, and the densely-patterned carpets are perhaps a mere handful of seasons away from replacement.

Several individuals of note sit at Berenar's table. Isthanar and his wife, for example, LAUGH over some comment made by Sonevet Athmaza. Pashavar is there as well, though his attention is split three ways between the CAPTAIN OF THE GUARD, his wife, and a glass of brandy.

Maia and Vedero have been arranged across from one another, likely on purpose. At Maia's side, Thara is stiff as a board. Next to Vedero, however, is the dignified Osmerrem BERENARAN (sixties, appropriately jewelried). Much like her husband, she possesses a certain twinkle to her that only comes with age and good humour.

BERENARAN

——At which point, Eiru looks up at the trapeze artist and says, 'My word, darling, does that man know he's on the ceiling?'

The courtiers around Berenaran CHUCKLE POLITELY. Once Thara finishes interpreting, MAIA LAUGHS as well.

BERENARAN (CONT'D)

Actually, we believe you were in attendance for that one, Archduchess.

Vedero glances up from her plate, polite but clearly disinterested.

VEDERO

Were we?

BERENARAN

We suppose you were quite little at the time. It was the year their mazai cast a sea of stars across the Rohethadeise ballrooms.

VEDERO

Ah, yes. We had forgotten.

BERENARAN

If only they had saved such a performance for when you were just a bit older. We would have liked to know how accurate their illusion was.

VEDERO

Hm. Quite unfortunate that they did not, yes.

Berenaran meets her husband's eyes across the room. Maia recognises the look as a cry for help: he finds himself looking at his interpreter and secretary the same way.

MAIA

Stars of mazai is...

The table's attention fixes upon him. He has not yet attempted Ethuverazhin this evening. Maia swallows.

MAIA (CONT'D)

...much beautiful, we think. Our goddess is Cstheio Caireizhasan.

For a moment, Berenaran forgets her court manners. Her lashes flutter as her eyes widen.

Vedero looks between the startled Berenaran and her brother. He flashes her a small, tentative smile. Indeed, Berenaran's continued questioning has found a new target.

BERENARAN

Forgive us, but——goddess, singular? We did not realise the Barizheise custom was henotheistic.

MAIA

Heno...?

THARA

(in Barizhin)

It means to worship only one of the gods.

MAIA

Oh! No, no, we misspeak. (IN BARIZHIN) The Lady of Stars holds our fate in her hands. We pray to her most often among the Seven Great Gods.

As Thara begins to INTERPRET for him, his speech becomes inaudible. We rack focus to the grand doors of the dining room.

TETHIMAR

Ah! A pleasure as always, Berenar.

Vedero snaps to attention as ESCHEVIS TETHIMAR (elven, thirty, roguishly handsome) enters a few steps behind Chavar. The bow he offers Berenar is the technical perfection of an artform.

BERENAR

Good evening! Dach'osmer, Lord Chancellor.

CHAVAR

You'll have to forgive our son, Berenar——he's under the weather tonight. We hope that Dach'osmer Tethimar makes up for the absence.

BERENAR

Goodness. Is the boy alright?

CHAVAR

The boy is perhaps still smarting from Osmin Erimin's sudden rejection.

BERENARAN

Poor Nurevis.

CHAVAR

He will forget it all very soon, we are certain.

Tethimar turns to acknowledge the lady of the house——and then notices that he is in the company of the emperor. Or seems to notice, anyways.

TETHIMAR

Serenity! (HE PROSTRATES HIMSELF) Forgive us, we were not told you would be here.

MAIA

Rise.

With catlike grace, Tethimar obeys.

CHAVAR

Serenity, allow us to introduce Eschevis Tethimar, son of the Duke Tethimel.

THARA

(for Maia)

His Serenity is pleased to make your acquaintance, Dach'osmer.

TETHIMAR

And we are pleased to make his.

(to Maia)

Unfortunately we know not the proper form to greet you in Barizhin.

He turns to Vedero.

TETHIMAR

Archduchess, it is always an honour.

VEDERO

Quite.

Vedero maintains tight control over her expression as the Lord Chancellor and his guest take the last unoccupied seats at the table——the pair to the emperor's immediate right. Tethimar sits across from Berenaran, putting him and Vedero just over a table's width apart.

TETHIMAR

Now, what was the topic? We do so hate to intrude on a conversation and not even know what it was.

BERENARAN

Oh! Let's see... I believe it was the stars, yes?

TETHIMAR

Ah! So you share your sister's inclinations, Serenity? How fortuitous.

Once Thara has interpreted this, Maia's ears perk up.

MAIA

You like stars, Archduchess?

Vedero's, on the other hand, flick.

VEDERO

Yes.

TETHIMAR

You should hear her speak of them, Serenity. She has the soul of a poet, we should think.

The archduchess glances over to Berenar. He has just finished a conversation with Pashavar.

VEDERO

Please, excuse us.

She rises from the table before anyone can get another word in. Tethimar appears disappointed to see her leave.

TETHIMAR

Oh dear. She usually loves to discuss such things. Perhaps it is still too soon.

Maia watches his sister pull Berenar aside.

34B INT. BERENADA APARTMENTS - HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS 34B

Once sufficiently out of both sight and earshot, Vedero turns on her heel. She towers over Berenar, her face brimming with cold rage.

VEDERO

So, Berenar, how long have you been in Tethimar's pocket?

BERENAR

I——Archduchess, we fear we do not know what you mean.

VEDERO

You cannot possibly think we are so unobservant.

Berenar looks back over his shoulder. If he angles himself correctly, he can catch sight of Tethimar speaking at the emperor, who smiles politely in return.

BERENAR

...We ask for your forgiveness, Archduchess, for we did not extend an invitation to Tethimar at all.

VEDERO

We somehow doubt even Chavar would be so bold to give Nurevis' invitation away without a single word to the hosts.

BERENAR

Er. Admittedly, the invitation was for 'Lord Chancellor and Guest'. We did not think there was anyone Chavar might invite who was not, on some level, already a welcome addition.

VEDERO

Well, he quite proved you wrong, didn't he?

BERENAR

Archduchess...

VEDERO

We recognise that the Corazhas will never need to see us as little more than a piece on a gameboard, but we must continue to live the life that you choose for us!

BERENAR

It was our design to have you speak to your brother, Archduchess. Not Eschevis Tethimar.

Vedero's ears just barely tilt down.

VEDERO

So you confess to having designs?

BERENAR

Yes.

She stares at him.

BERENAR

With all due respect to His Serenity, Archduchess, we are a servant of the Drazhada. Right now, that is you.

VEDERO

We are not the head of house.

BERENAR

No, the one who holds that honour is a frightened child who does not speak the language, nor knows a soul at court but——an we may speak plainly——two men of ill repute and the Zhasanai. You are a scholar, Archduchess, and an immensely competent one at that. Were circumstances different, we would be proud to serve you as Ethuverazhid Zhas. Instead, we will do the next best thing.

VEDERO

...We see.

Berenar takes a slow, deep breath to calm himself. He then looks at her pleadingly.

BERENAR

He is still a boy. You are his older sister. For the sake of our country, lead him.

He straightens his attire and turns to leave.

BERENAR (CONT'D)

Before the Celehada get there first.

As he returns to the dining room, Vedero peers past him. Thara seems to loom over a seated Maia, expressionless as he relays Tethimar's commentary.

34C INT. UNTHEILENEISE COURT - HALLS - NIGHT 34C

This late into the evening, the halls between the Berenadeise apartments and the Alcethmeret are void of all life. FOOTSTEPS ECHO as Maia, Vedero, and Edrehasivar's entourage pass through the Court's winding passageways.

VEDERO

Serenity, we...regret the way we have spoken to you tonight.

MAIA

Regret? For why?

VEDERO

We know ourself to be... we were never the personable one.

Maia has nothing to say to that; how can he compare her to those he has never met?

VEDERO

What we mean to say is that we have acted in a way unbecoming of our house. We felt... ambushed.

THARA

(in Barizhin)

Er. Caught, ensnared, trapped.

MAIA

Oh. Like fish in creek.

His ears fall before he can catch them.

MAIA (CONT'D)

Trap you, we do not want. You say 'no', is fine. We do not be mad.

VEDERO

You are not the one who concerns us, Serenity.

Maia turns to Thara for help. A QUIET EXCHANGE.

THARA

His Serenity would appreciate some clarity on that statement.

Vedero grimaces. She looks over her shoulder.

VEDERO

Eschevis Tethimar believes himself engaged to us.

MAIA

(in Barizhin)

What? How would a man come to think that?

THARA

...His Serenity would appreciate some clarity on that statement as well.

VEDERO

We think that Papa——that our father drafted the marriage contracts shortly before he left. He was able to hold out for a better match for quite some time, but the situation in the north finally turned his hand.

THARA

(for Maia)

But no contract was ever signed?

VEDERO

No. But everyone knew.

MAIA

Not we.

VEDERO

...And now we have told you, and you will be honour-bound to follow his promise through. Brilliant.

MAIA

You tell us what?

His manner is so placid, Vedero opens her mouth before she realises the game. She closes it again and eyes him with newfound interest.

THARA

(for Maia)

His Serenity would like his sister to know that he has enjoyed her company greatly tonight, and that he is glad to speak with her over nothing of import nor interest.

VEDERO

We... yes. We too are grateful.

They are just outside the grilles of the Alcethmeret. Maia and his nohecharei linger a moment longer.

THARA

(for Maia)

...And he says that next time you meet, he would like to hear about the stars.

34D INT. VERVENTHEILEIAN - MORNING 34D

DESHEHAR

...Furthermore, we have already lost a month's time to this endless argument, and still neither Berenar nor Pashavar have presented a solution which does not create as many problems as it solves!

Each Witness takes up a substantial section of an equally substantial table, armed with their own collection of papers, folios, secretaries.

Thara, seated close at Maia's side, quietly, tiresomely, interprets. Aisava beside him has a great many papers and stamps but his notes are long abandoned. He is pouring dark orchor from a lidded bowl into cups for the imperial contingent right at the table.

PASHAVAR

He says, with no solution of his own to offer.

The room rumbles as laughter and annoyance mix together.

DESHEHAR

If the Witness for the Judiciate will permit us to speak, he may find that we do, in fact, have our own solution to offer.

BERENAR

Oh? Is it to give the land to the Doreshada?

BROMAR

Berenar, please.

BERENAR

What? It is the idea he presented the last three times.

PASHAVAR

Oh, let him say whatever it is he plans to say. Then we may at last be released from this room.

Deshehar

We think the land should be given to the Doreshada.

MAIA

(mouths)

'We think the land should be given to the Doreshada.'

The Witnesses groan as one. None of them have been paying their silent emperor mind, leaving Maia's mockery unnoticed by all but his retinue.

Meanwhile, Aisava chokes back a laugh. Thara and the nohecharei remain impassive——but when Deshehar continues, rather than taking back up his duty as interpreter Thara sips his tea.

DESHEHAR

Their use of the land was uncontested for a century until the Nelozho township instigated this farce! It is theirs by right!

BERENAR

Wasn't there that business a few years ago regarding the Deshehada's tenant-farmers squatting on their ancestral land? Odd... we cannot remember you so fervently defending the pretense of adverse possession in that matter.

PASHAVAR

Gentlemen, gentlemen! Can we please admit that you are both wrong and get on with it?

DESHEHAR

An easy thing to say when one represents the faction taking the bribe money, Pashavar.

PASHAVAR

Oh? Are we making accusations now? At last, we may recognise yourself and Berenar for the poachers you are.

All begins to fall apart. Maia rubs the bridge of his nose. He tries to say something, but cannot be heard above the shouting. He looks to Aisava and Thara, stationed on one side of him, and then to his nohecharei, stationed on the other.

A nohecharis BANGS his fist against the table.

The Witnesses all turn, silenced.

MAIA

Thank you.

(to the Corazhas)

We wished to say... this behaviour is... it does not fit.

Though his voice is still quiet and heavily accented, and his words hesitant, his command over Ethuverazhin has grown.

MAIA

We are ones who govern, yes? Not ones who bicker. Bickering is privilege for the common man. It is not ours.

PASHAVAR

See? Even his Serenity thinks this has gone on too long.

Maia stares at Pashavar, who realises what he has just said all too late. Pashavar coughs and looks to his hands, but does not apologise.

In fact, no one at the table offers up apologies for Pashavar's behaviour, let alone their own. Of those present, only Berenar holds any sympathy in his expression.

Thara inhales through his teeth.

THARA

(quietly, in Barizhin)

He, er... he says——

MAIA

No.

Thara stiffens. His eyes widen.

MAIA (CONT'D)

(more gently)

Thank you, Celehar, but we know what he says.

Thara bows his head. Maia returns to the Corazhas.

MAIA

Dach'osmer Pashavar. We believe you were correct about something. Both other Witnesses are wrong.

Pashavar's expression——at first alarm at being called upon directly——turns to silent curiosity.

MAIA (CONT'D)

You are also wrong. Everyone in this room is wrong.

MADRINAR

Serenity——

MAIA

We will not reward being wrong. We reject all claims.

As a group, all in attendance respond with confused EXCLAMATIONS. Maia sets his jaw. He cannot allow even one person in the room to think his decision is mutable.

MAIA

River belongs to avar of Thu-Cethor. Is not——should not be question. Rivers in Ethuveraz have always belonged to avarsin. We will not give to Doreshada, who use un... un-contested before only because they bribe avar's men. But land to west of river, Doreshada right is legitimate. Land to east, we say give to township.

Once more, it is Berenar who stands apart from the rest. He sits back, contemplative.

Chavar rises from his seat at the other end of the table and bows.

CHAVAR

Your word is law, Serenity.

MAIA

Yes.

Chavar straightens. Though he performs the motions of his role well enough, he does little to hide his exasperation with the emperor. He clears his throat.

CHAVAR

Well. With that matter brought to a close, we believe it is well past time to be done with today.

This receives AGREEMENT from the Corazhas. Unfortunately——

MAIA

We will hear of Witnesses for Wisdom of Choharo, Lord Chancellor. Then day is done.

Chavar's smile widens just a bit too far.

CHAVAR

Of course, Serenity.

Maia waits for him to continue.

CHAVAR

They are Witnessing.

Maia's face does not budge. He continues to wait.

CHAVAR

Are there any specific questions? We fear we have missed something.

MAIA

Is week six. Soon will be seven.

CHAVAR

Then the Witnesses have required six weeks thus far. Nearly seven. We do not control the speed at which information reveals itself, Serenity. Nor do they.

With his thin lips spread so far apart, he appears more and more as an animal baring its teeth.

Aisava leans forward.

AISAVA

(whispering)

Many of the secretaries have ceased taking notes. If he does have any information to deliver, it is not likely to leave this room in one piece.

Maia closes his eyes.

MAIA

(in Barizhin)

Celehar. Please tell them that this meeting is finished.

A flash of concern crosses Thara's face upon hearing the emperor revert to his mother tongue, but he remembers himself quickly. He bows.

THARA

His Serenity grants recess to the Corazhas. Thank you.

As the room empties of Witnesses and secretaries, Maia rubs idly at his knuckles. His face remains blank as stone.

He does not notice Berenar's approach until the man stands before him, an overstuffed folio in his arms.

BERENAR

Serenity. If we may.

MAIA

Day is done, Berenar.

BERENAR

And we thank you for that. But we have a final question. We fear it will deprive us of sleep if we do not at least try to ask it.

Aisava opens his mouth, but is quieted with a wave of Maia's hand. Maia then gestures to Berenar.

BERENAR

You are entirely correct in your assertions regarding our behaviour and we fully accept your decision to end the matter of Nelozho and the Doreshada here.

His face softens. His is suddenly demure, a man at the start of his sixties who has accepted that a boy of eighteen——even the one who rules his homeland——deserves some gentleness.

BERENAR (CONT'D)

But do you?

Maia blinks.

35 INT. ROSE ROOM - EVENING 35

The walls of the Rose Room are papered in a repeating pattern of roses, both singular and posies in various shades, atop light and Imperial white stripes. The room itself is well and softly lit, with several couches in various light values.

XX NOTE WE HAVE WRITTEN THE ROSE ROOM TO REFLECT CSETHIRO ZHASAN'S DESIGN AS OPPOSED TO THE PREVIOUS ITERATION BECAUSE WE HAVE EYES AND WOULD PREFER THEY NOT LOSE THEIR FACULTY -CAMB XX

Maia and Idra sit on opposite sides of a bokh set, though it seems neither is fully invested in the game. Maia has his legs folded beneath him so that he may accommodate a great book of architectural engineering on his lap, and Idra watches with mild horror as the Zhasanai tears through a pile of letters.

CSORU

Unbelievable! Completely and categorically unbelievable!

She lifts a particular letter up to read aloud:

CSORU

'Our niece, Osmin Baronin, is known to all around her as an individual of excellent character, and she is much beloved for both cleverness and good cheer.'

IDRA

Oh, terrible.

MAIA

Cleverness, good cheer. Both are good qualities, no?

CSORU

Good qualities, yes. Especially for a girl of three years!

MAIA

Eugh. Terrible.

Idra nods.

MAIA

Must I marry? Don't answer that.

Csoru, who had been prepared to explain the purpose of inheritance via bloodline, closes her mouth. Idra, meanwhile, advances a piece one step, wary of giving Maia a hint to his material.

IDRA

Cheer up, Uncle. The Court must have at least one lady who is to thy liking. Thy move.

Maia half-closes the book in his lap so that he can lean over and look at the board.

MAIA

Is not matter of liking, of——of preference. Not my preference. Well, other than the michenoi. I do not want marrying one of those.

CSORU

More for Idra, I suppose.

IDRA

I beg your pardon!

CSORU

What? Your uncle is the one who insists on playing regent——which is how future volumes of history will refer to Edrehasivar the Seventh, if he does not find someone to make him an heir of his own.

Thara, sprawled out across a couch with an impossibly fat book, makes a face.

THARA

Csoru. Please.

CSORU

Oh, very well. But I am not wrong.

She flips to the next letter. Maia places his next piece with the lunge of a cavalier.

MAIA

(in Barizhin)

Advance.

CSORU

Well! I jest, and yet! You'll love this one, Idra: Paru Tethimin.

Idra GROANS.

CSORU

A much better option than Min Baronin, you must agree.

MAIA

Tethimin? How close to Eschevis Tethimar?

IDRA

She is his younger sister.

MAIA

What——if I do not give him my sister, he thinks, give me his?

CSORU

Any road to a Drazhar with those horrid Tethimadeise curls, I suppose. Turn him down and Idra will get the same offer in two years's time, mark my words.

IDRA

Yes, because Paru Tethimin and I get along so well.

(to Maia)

Thy move.

Instantly, cavalier takes. Maia glances at the piece's base, and TCHES, unimpressed by whatever he finds. It is once again Idra's turn. Idra looks overwhelmed.

CSORU

All those little playdates you and your sisters were forced into! You all looked so thoroughly miserable. Except Ino, of course.

IDRA

Yes, Ino likes everybody.

Idra moves another piece.

MAIA

Un-move thy Anmureisa, Idra, or die in three turns.

IDRA

My——What? How dost thou know it is my Anmureisa?

MAIA

Didst tell me just now.

Idra EXCLAIMS.

MAIA

...And I take thy general and all thy mazai, so it is Anmureisa or cavalier. Thy avar hides with bokhrat, yes?

He gestures to A7 and A8.

IDRA

Drat. I suppose that makes thee victor. Well played.

MAIA

Un-move thy piece, is all right! Only witness here is Celehar, and he cares not. Dost care, Thara?

Thara gives a noncommittal HUM. Maia smiles.

MAIA

Is more fun this way. Canst win still.

CSORU

Oh, Vedero and thee shall be insufferable together once she learns thou'rt good at this game.

MAIA

My sister plays?

CSORU

Like a python.

IDRA

Father once referred to her as a reason to never learn the rules.

CSORU

The only person who will still play against her is Csethiro, and they know one another's play styles too well to find it worthwhile.

MAIA

Dach'osmin Ceredin. She must also be a strong player, then?

CSORU

Oh, Csethiro's a nazhcreö. When she plays the Archduchess, each game depends on whether Csethiro can sniff out the python and uproot her before she strikes.

MAIA

Interesting.

Maia captures Idra's three remaining pieces in one sweep. He knocks them over gently so that they do not roll.

MAIA

Thy avar is dead, (IN BARIZHIN) may the smoke carry his soul to dwell with the gods.

(in Ethuverazhin)

Good game! Another?

36 INT. EMPEROR'S CHAMBERS - NIGHT 36

Maia sits hunched on the floor, his paper nest reconstructed around him. He is in his nightclothes, with his hair braided for sleep.

DAZHIS ATHMAZA (twenties, neatly dressed) clears his throat.

DAZHIS

The other nohecharei will murder us in our sleep if we do not remind you of yours.

MAIA

Our sleep? We will have it, Dazhis. Ten more minutes.

Dazhis nods and settles back against the wall. He stands there as Maia SCRIBBLES and FLIPS PAGES. As always, he holds the pen strangely when he writes, like a young child still developing manual dexterity.

In his own chambers, the emperor is guarded by one nohecharis within and one without. Thus, Maia and Dazhis are completely alone: in a wide angle we see them, a dachenmaza and a scrawny boy in a shift.

Eventually, curiosity leads Dazhis's nose back towards the emperor.

DAZHIS

That's a lot of diagrams.

MAIA

Mhm! They relax us.

DAZHIS

Ah. Yes.

Dazhis settles, only to be pulled in again by the sound of Maia TURNING GEARS.

DAZHIS

May we ask what you are doing, Serenity?

MAIA

Will only be ten minutes, is promise.

DAZHIS

We do not mean to hurry you. We are merely curious.

Maia blinks. Someone wants to know about his interests?

MAIA

...Is puzzle. Or will be, when work is finished. Easy one.

He turns his body so that he can demonstrate the state of his work. It looks something like a music box, but with petal-shaped levers at the top and a gallery at the side for two rows of buttons.

MAIA

What is word... needing, goal... object! Object of puzzle is to play melody. Press buttons to give value, then pulling lever sets it. As such:

Though the buttons are not yet placed, Maia is able to press the values in manually.

MAIA (CONT'D)

Two tens, seven ones. Makes twenty seven. Now we set.

Pressing down the petals elicits a resounding CLACK.

MAIA

If all values are correct, turning crank will make music. But if value is wrong...

He manually sets five values and then begins to turn the crank. The first four notes are recognisably the Eldest Rose's aria from The Dream of the Empress Corivero. The fifth, discordant note, however, forces all of the currently 'set' petals to pop back up again. Maia grins as broadly as we've ever seen.

MAIA

Reset! Must find first value and then start over. Good to train michen's ear for music, and to teach counting by tens and ones.

Dazhis's eyes are wide. Unreadably so.

DAZHIS

This is for children?

MAIA

Mhm. Is for Ino——my cousin Sheveän is unhappy she plays with toys, not listens to tutor. Takes toys away. But learning toy, she cannot be unhappy. Gift from Zhas, insult to take away.

DAZHIS

It must be complicated, making something for such a... such a special child.

MAIA

Is fairly simple! More simple than version for older michenei. In that one, is rotary device at center. Makes order of petals or starting values of notes change on reset. Is like Corazhas.

DAZHIS

Oh? How so?

MAIA

Must make guesses over and over again. Who wants what? And in what order? And you only need it wrong once for the whole thing to... to be needing reset. Start from beginning. All progress gone.

Dazhis regards Maia carefully. Sympathy pulls at the edges of his expression.

DAZHIS

Your first nohecharei did appear rather... worn out, we will say. What happened?

MAIA

Argument. Is always argument, but this time every answer hurts someone. Hurts the law, or hurts the poor, or will lead good family to ruin. Hours of Witnesses arguing like michenei, no progress.

DAZHIS

Ha. Yes, that sounds like the Corazhas.

MAIA

When we make our choice——least bad for everyone, we hope——Lord Berenar comes to us and asks us are we satisfied with solution, what it means for people of Nelozho Township. Of course we are not satisfied they cannot afford feeding themselves!

Dazhis HUMS——acknowledgement, but maybe not agreeement.

MAIA

But Berenar has no solution either, just asks us to find. And we are trying! We want good answer. But maybe is no good answer.

DAZHIS

Surely the keeping of the indigent poor of Nelozho Township is beneath the concern of Ethuverazhid Zhas.

MAIA

Beneath Varenechibel, perhaps.

(he steels himself)

Emperor is father to nation. Has duty to care for his people.

Our shot is wide enough to see the both of them: Maia on the floor, Dazhis against the wall, looking down at him. The earlier sympathy is gone from his face, replaced with the blank mask of the nohecharis.

MAIA

...Ah, but you are right, it grows late. We will put our work away.

DAZHIS

Yes, very wise.

Maia gathers the materials into a woven basket. He takes the books and papers into his arms. Rather than moving everything to the floor, or to a desk, all are fit easily in the extra space of his too-wide bed.

DAZHIS

Rest well, Serenity.

37 INT. EMPEROR'S CHAMBERS - LATER 37

In the dark, Maia lies awake, staring up at nothing. His thumb idly rubs at the great scar on the opposite forearm.

Movement on the other side of the curtains. Maia tenses——but it's only Dazhis settling into a chair.

38 INT. VERVEN'THEILEIAN - MORNING 38

Maia sits at his place at the great table. Papers lay in an arc before him. As before, he is bracketed by Thara, Aisava, and his nohecharei.

His head is held high, his ears neutral. Cold and exceptionally impassive, he embodies the same imperial elegance as Varenechibel IV before him.

For better or for worse, he is his father's son.

XX NOTE WARDROBE AND EDOCHAREI SHOULD ENDEAVOR TO MATCH AS CLOSELY AS POSSIBLE VARENECHIBEL IV AS HE APPEARS IN PEVELRA'S THE VERVEN'THEILEIAN AT DAWN. -AIVO XX

The doors to the chamber OPEN. Deshehar and Pashavar are already ARGUING. They pause when they see Maia already in the room.

PASHAVAR

...We are not late, are we?

MAIA

No. Sit.

The pair and their respective secretaries file in. The rest follow shortly.

When all are seated, Maia clears his throat.

MAIA

A day has passed. We have all eaten, slept. We are prepared to speak as government should?

The whole room shifts awkwardly in their seats.

MAIA

We will take that as yes. Now, to resume business: Berenar.

Berenar straightens.

MAIA

Tell us of the poor of Nelozho.

DESHEHAR

Serenity? We thought your decision was made–

MAIA

Our decision is made. But judgment is incomplete.

Pashavar and Deshehar share a worried look.

BERENAR

Their situation is dire, Serenity. Rain does not grace Nelozho as it once did. The manufactories in the next towns over release great clouds of steam, and so the rain falls on those towns and not on Nelozho.

SONEVET

Then they ought to build a manufactory.

BERENAR

...The manufactories also leech innumerable chemicals into the groundwater, causing what the locals call well-sickness. It is not what one would wish upon a child.

Maia, Thara, and Madrinar make warding gestures.

BERENAR

If this were not terrible enough, a few years ago the town's main granary exploded, as such structures are wont to do in conditions of drought. They are still struggling to recover from this tragedy, unable to grow enough rice to feed their families as it is harvested, never mind to store it for the off season.

PASHAVAR

And why is it, Berenar, that the granaries run empty? If we are to retread old ground, we ought to retread it thoroughly.

BERENAR

It is because there is no rain.

PASHAVAR

It is because they declaim crop rotation as an act of heresy!

BERENAR

That is their way, Pashavar. Would you prefer we root out the townsfolk and replace them with those you see fit?

PASHAVAR

No need! Their own religion will see to that, if they do not change their ways!

MAIA

Pashavar, what is your secretary's name?

PASHAVAR

Pardon? It is Mer Rovelezh. Why?

MAIA

Mer Rovelezh, you are freed from service for next ten minutes. Pashavar has time to interrupt, therefore he has time to write.

DESHEHAR

But–—but he is right, Serenity! Why must we bend backwards for a people who will not save themselves?

Berenar rubs the bridge of his nose.

DESHEHAR

You know it is true, Berenar, you must! They claim to seek justice, yet they graze their beasts on Doreshadeise land! They fish in the river without permits, then wonder why the stewards of that water treat them as pests!

BERENAR

They cannot afford the permits!

MAIA

Were permits paid, relationship between Nelozho and Doreshada would improve?

DESHEHAR

Yes! Easily! Definitively!

PASHAVAR

(quietly, bitterly)

As would their relationship with the local government.

MAIA

Ahh. We are glad you have said as such. Mer Aisava?

Aisava retrieves a large, rolled-up sheet of paper from one of the undersecretaries and spreads it across the table.

The work is Maia's, though illustrative embellishments have been added by assistants. It features a map of the relevant area with a specific bend in the river circled. Additionally included are several designs for a potential toll-bridge. Some possess a strange gate-like structure under the water, with simply rendered fish held back from passage. Others boast miniature water-wheels, nets to catch oversized particulates, or other such advancements.

MAIA

Principate will build bridge. Bridge will bring in tolls; money goes to poor of Nelozho. Permits are afforded, poaching goes down——relationship with both Doreshada and principate improves. As both Deshehar and Pashavar say it will, yes?

For the first time, the Verven'theileian is silent.

MAIA

We are heard?

The witnesses all look amongst one another, still and speechless. It is Pashavar, who has leaned back into his chair in contemplation, who speaks.

PASHAVAR

Yes. It is a strong compromise. None will disagree with that——or so we hope.

He shoots a look at Deshehar, who appears aghast at the insinuation.

MAIA

Matter is closed, then. Mer Aisava, what is next?

AISAVA

Serenity. The next order of business is a return to the Lord Chancellor and the Witnesses for the Wisdom of Choharo.

Chavar, currently in the middle of whispering furiously to his secretaries, jumps.

CHAVAR

Did we not give our report yesterday?

MAIA

Yes. But we ask for today's report, Lord Chancellor.

Chavar's entire face flushes, bright and ugly. He starts to rise from his chair, body propelled entirely by outrage.

CHAVAR

Serenity! It has been but one day!

Maia's face does not so much as twitch.

MAIA

We see. You will make your report at future meeting, then.

Chavar, still half-standing, slowly returns himself to his seat. Maia waits until he is settled to say:

MAIA

You have two days.

CHAVAR

Pardon?!

MAIA

Matter is closed. Mer Aisava?

DISSOLVE TO:

39 INT. ARCHDUCHESS'S FOYER - EVENING 39

From the very first room, Vedero's apartments are relentlessly neat and very modern in design, the furniture all simplified forms with relatively little ornamentation and the wallpaper a single, light colour with a velvet texture, so the artworks on display——a diverse array of paintings, vases, and small metal and marble statues——command the visitor's attention. It is a museum in miniature.

As Maia enters, Thara and Csoru and nohecharei in tow, he looks around with widening eyes.

Vedero awaits in the antechamber. She greets her brother with a bow.

Maia has grown accustomed to the Corazhas. He has grown weary of Chavar. Vedero, however, is another matter entirely. His posture shrinks. Still, he smiles.

MAIA

We thank you for your invitation, sister.

VEDERO

Of course, Serenity.

Her face hardly moves as she speaks. The pair stare at one another. Maia's ears begin to sink.

VEDERO

Our nephew tells us you are a dab hand at bokh. He is still playing, then?

MAIA

Yes! Yes, we play many games since my arrival.

VEDERO

And how would you evaluate his skills? Merrem Lorazho, the door, please.

Her HOUSEKEEPER bows.

MAIA

Idra has much potential! We do looking at endgame problems together, where he is most weak——

Csoru touches Maia's shoulder lightly.

CSORU

We are going to get a drink. You two enjoy your bokh strategy.

We follow Csoru into the next room, where young courtiers, female and male, lounge about the room in little groups, every bit as decorative as the garlands (lily, orchid, pansy) that spiral up the many sturdy pillars. Among the courtiers are scholars peppered throughout, recognisable by their ribboned braids.

Csoru makes a beeline for a long table against one wall with an assortment of finger foods, a samovar of tea, and rows of pre-made digestif cocktails. She begins piling sweets high on a plate.

We pan away, back over the crowded parlor.

40 INT. ARCHDUCHESS'S PARLOR - LATER 40

Maia has nestled into a couch in the corner, a nohecharis stood on either side. Thara is perched on the other side of the same couch, notably more distant than he was in the Verven'theileian.

AVRO HALEZHO (thirties, respectable) clasps her hands together and nods to something Maia has just said. Her brother-in-law, MER HALEZH (thirties, slightly wild-haired), shifts nervously from one foot to the next.

MAIA

Is remarkable work, that of the clocksmith's guild. We try to speak to you again, Merrem... Halezho, yes?

Halezho beams.

MAIA

And Mer Halezh. We will try to remember.

HALEZHO

We do not take the privilege of your time for granted, Serenity. We thank you.

The pair bow before exiting. Halezho moves at a confident pace, Mer Halezh scurrying behind her.

As they go, they pass by Csethiro Ceredin and her Loudest Sister. The sister is too invested in the failing flirtations of some OVERINDULGED COURTIER (young, insufferable) to notice. Csethiro, on the other hand, peeks back at the emperor.

CSORU

It's 'endeavour'.

MAIA

We will try to... endeavour?

CSORU

No, no——'We will endeavour to remember.' See?

MAIA

Ah. Means what?

CSORU

To... to make an attempt. To resolve to achieve something.

Helpless, Maia looks to Thara. Thara looks tired.

Csethiro rolls her eyes.

MAIA

...So, 'try'?

CSORU

Mm, yes, but not quite. It is more polite.

MAIA

Because needs more letters for spelling? Awful.

CSORU

It is about the connotations, dear.

MAIA

It is about having too many words with same meaning! Except no, secretly, meaning is different. But only a little. 'Hm, yes, not quite.' Elves! Tch.

This earns a snort from Csethiro——which itself earns Maia's notice. She straightens, folds her hands in front of her.

Maia evaluates her. They have not spoken since the dreadful events of her first showing, but that does not mean she has gone unnoticed all this time.

From the straightness of her posture to the curve of her gaze, each component of her countenance has been plucked and pruned and oh-so-carefully tailored to her singular role as a yet-unmarried woman. Why, then, does she stand out against the crowd?

MAIA

Dach'osmin Ceredin! You have something to say?

Csethiro's ears flick. For her, it is a surprise that he even remembers her name. Loudest's eyes widen; she whispers something in Csethiro's ear and shoves her forward.

CSETHIRO

Naught that demands your attention, Serenity, we assure you.

MAIA

Hm. A shame.

CSORU

Ah, Csethiro! It's been absolutely ages since we last saw you.

CSETHIRO

Two weeks?

CSORU

As we said! Ages! As we recall, you used to haunt our sitting room at teatime twice a week at least. Has your father finally given you up for a lost cause?

CSETHIRO

An we did not know better, we would think you were trying to get under our skin, Csoru Zhasanai.

CSORU

Hmph. We rather thought we were succeeding. You are the one who is trying.

MAIA

Not 'endeavouring'?

This time, Csethiro laughs out loud.

CSETHIRO

We are content to be called endeavouring.

Thara looks between Maia and Csethiro. He then looks at Csoru, who is quietly unimpressed.

CSETHIRO

...We hear some of the old guard find you endeavouring as well, Serenity. A point in your favour, to be clear. Would it be unkind for us to ask how you are adjusting to the Court?

MAIA

Not unkind. But we fear answer will not excite you.

CSETHIRO

Bore us, then.

The next hour passes us by as a series of gestures. Lips press to the edge of a teacup. A cluster of courtiers laugh at some scholar's well-placed line. A well-bred lady nervously fiddles with the pearls on her neck.

When we return to Maia and Csethiro, they are remarkably plain in comparison. They have wound up hunched over a game of bokh.

Csethiro's features are screwed up in focus. Maia, meanwhile, has idled at the end of one of his braids for so long that it is coming loose. If either takes notice of the other's uncourtliness, the membership to their mutual fraternity of bokh enthusiasts allows them to conveniently ignore it.

Vedero is equally uninterested in their appearances compared to their gameplay. She sits catty-corner to Csoru, focused intensely on the unfolding match.

MAIA

Corazhas is... is Corazhas. We do not grow up speaking Ethuverazhin so they think we are witless. We should like to see them argue legal minutes in Barizhin.

CSORU

'Minutiae'.

Csethiro's ears flick in exasperation, and Maia laughs. She castles a pair of pieces——Maia watches carefully, scribbling on a notepad by his elbow.

INSERT - '2 dark anmureisa - avar pretends?
bokhrat - C1 D1'

CSETHIRO

Your move.

Maia's response is quick. His piece takes... cavalier, we learn, when he flips the piece over to check the seal engraved on its underside. He nods to himself, having guessed correctly.

MAIA

(in Barizhin)

Advance.

Csethiro evaluates the board with a whistle.

CSETHIRO

Damn.

MAIA

It was a clever gamble, Dach'osmin.

CSETHIRO

Not clever enough.

(to Vedero)

Remind me never to play thy baby brother for money.

She puts her elbows on the table.

CSETHIRO

(to Maia)

Why didn't you grow up speaking Ethuverazhin?

MAIA

Ah. Our guardian thinking michenai should be seen, not heard. Better not seen also.

CSETHIRO

...Oh. We were not aware.

As evidenced by the momentary alarm on his companions's faces, this information is new to all. Maia has told no one.

He did not expect it to land so heavily. Awkwardly, with a smile that is more of a grimace, he attempts to backpedal:

MAIA

Is not so different at Court, no? Parents send michen to governess, tutor, foster family... (HE WAVES A HAND) But no matter.

A brief silence takes the group. Csethiro puts her attention fully on the board. Maia has had her on the defensive, but as Idra said, she is a nazhcreö, a night-cat, not an evrin——with one of her mazai, she breaks into his line.

CSETHIRO

One would think an imperial tutor obliged to teach his student the national language.

(beat)

Your move.

Maia blinks. He opens his mouth, only to close it.

Stiff and silent, his eyes fall from her. He ignores her attack: either the piece she threatens is not his avar, or he is suicidally brave. Revealing his light Anmureisa with one move right across the board, he threatens C1——either Csethiro's bokhrat, or her general.

In this, at least, he has the upper hand.

MAIA

(in Barizhin)

Advance.

He does not look back up.

Csethiro's ears flatten before she catches herself. Her eyes dart from Thara to Csoru to Vedero before she clears her throat.

CSETHIRO

Alas, the hour grows late. We fear we must resign.

(she stands)

Good night, Edrehasivar.

Maia's head snaps back up. He watches her swift exit with no small amount of confusion. An impulse has him flipping over the piece on C1——the general. He did not have her avar pinned.

His frown grows.

41 INT. VERVEN'THEILEIAN - MIDDAY 41

Maia has traded in his sister's bokh board for the endlessly long table at which the Corazhas meets. Chavar sits, as ever, on the other end. He stares at Maia down the length of his nose as he delivers his report.

Unlike Dach'osmin Ceredin, Chavar does not see Maia as an opponent worthy of his skills. He is also unafraid of making that much known.

CHAVAR

...And finally, the witnesses for the Wisdom of Choharo request at least one week's time before the next report.

MAIA

We thank you, Lord Chancellor.

CHAVAR

Quite. Now, Mer Aisava, the next order of business is...?

MAIA

Hold. Not yet.

Chavar bristles.

MAIA

Report says Wisdom of Choharo was serviced in Amalo.

CHAVAR

We are afraid we do not catch your meaning, Serenity.

MAIA

Witnesses have only spoken with those in Cetho.

CHAVAR

You cannot possibly intend to send our judicial witnesses to Thu-Athamar!

MAIA

We intend to see correct persons investigated, Lord Chancellor.

CHAVAR

Well! Ignoring the assumption that the 'correct' persons are not right under our very noses, or indeed that any such persons exist, we must remind you, Serenity, that Thu-Athamar greatly values the freedom your father granted them. Sending Witnesses from the Court to oversee the Thu-Athamareise investigation would seem to say we think them either incapable or complicit!

Maia sets his jaw. Unfortunately, Chavar is not wrong.

MAIA

Thu-Athamar is having his own investigation, then?

CHAVAR

An the principate believes it assassination as you do, Serenity, they certainly would.

MAIA

So you do not know. We see.

(he sighs)

We cannot risk implication of immunity for Thu-Athamareisei. Is dangerous precedent. But we must consider further. Any other matters to discuss?

BROMAR

Serenity, if we may. We have received word from the Barizheise consulate in Cairado that the Great Avar of Barizhan may be planning a visit for the end of the year.

MAIA

Dakh'avar does not travel, we thought.

BROMAR

That is correct, Serenity.

MAIA

...Ah. Floor is yours, Bromar.

42 INT. ROSE ROOM - LATER 42

After a long and difficult meeting with the Corazhas, Maia has settled into the rose room. On one side sits a stack of aeronautical illustrations. On the other, his secretaries's careful notes.

Thara sits discarded on the next couch over. With nothing better to do, his nose is in yet another novel, this one even fatter than the last.

Idra meanwhile reviews the workbook assigned to him by his tutor. He is assisted by an off-duty Dazhis Athmaza. The nohecharis seems pleased with Idra's work——when the boy finds it worth his attention, that is.

IDRA

Have we considered writing to Prince Orchenis directly? He is thy cousin, after all.

DAZHIS

You are very nearly finished, Idra. Focus is what?

IDRA

The primary tool of the mazai.

DAZHIS

Remember that.

Maia offers his nephew a sympathetic smile. Both he and Idra return to their separate work.

For all of ten seconds, anyways.

IDRA

And wouldn't an Amaleise culprit already know of any Thu-Athamareise investigators? Surely they are well-versed at avoiding them by now.

DAZHIS

Prince Idra, please.

IDRA

Sorry, Dazhis, we are simply——what in the world is Chavar thinking? The culprits could be covering up evidence as we speak!

MAIA

Probably he is thinking, 'Good.' But Dazhis is right, Idra. Would better for thee to focus on thy tutor's assignment.

IDRA

But we must be able to do something——!

MAIA

We must be cats, take careful steps. Every person of Thu-Athamar is at risk. An Chavar have something to do with the crash, thou'rt at risk. An he did not, thou'rt at risk. Already Chavar commits treason because he is wanting michenzhas to control.

Idra's ears fall. Dazhis watches, expression impenetrable.

MAIA

Take heart, Idra. Chavar takes bokhrat, knows our pieces, and we do not know his. But!

Thara glances up from his reading.

MAIA (CONT'D)

We can still win, if we are smart. Careful. Game is difficult, very difficult, but is not lost.

THARA

What about a piece that can be moved in secret? That should change the game, we think.

MAIA

...Explain?

Thara closes his book.

THARA

We are your Witness. But we need not Witness for you. (BEAT) Send us to Amalo, Serenity. We will better serve you there.

MAIA

But you are needed here.

Sadness spreads across Thara's face, dangerously close to pity.

THARA

Serenity, we are useless here. Idle.

MAIA

Useless? You are our translator!

THARA

And you have not required our service since Nelozho and the Doreshada. Serenity, you——

MAIA

You cannot leave! We cannot do this without you! Do not——

Maia cuts himself off so forcefully his TEETH CLICK. From our angle we see Maia in profile, and on the wall behind him his reflection in the silver of a moon-round mirror. For a long moment Maia stares at nothing, bereft and afraid.

Shame in the set of his ears. His gaze falls to his hands in his lap. He rubs at the ache in his knuckles.

MAIA

(quietly)

I forget myself. Forgive me.

Thara's eyes widen. He keeps his ears steady.

MAIA

I——we will not order you to remain here if you wish it not. Would... be wise to do as you suggest. Is little we can do, and you are Witness for the Dead. We have dead in need of Witnessing.

With a deep breath, he dons Edrehasivar as a veil. His spine straightens. He appears older.

XX NOTE DO NOT TRANSITION FULLY INTO EDREHASIVAR'S THEME BUT DO INTRODUCE A FEW NOTES OF THE LEITMOTIF INTO THE SCORE -AIVO XX

MAIA

What must we do, to——to——

(in Barizhin)

——petition you? Oh, witless hobgoblin thou art, Maia, I... Thara, please, I cannot——

THARA

(softly, in Barizhin)

Thou canst.

(in Ethuverazhin)

To petition us you need only ask, and name your dead.

MAIA

Then we petition you, Othala Celehar, to Witness for our father Nemera Drazhar, his sons Nemolis, Nazhira, and Ciris, for Mara Lilana, who was Wisdom of Choharo's pilot, and——and all others who are dead, if you can. We do not remember all their names. We are sorry.

THARA

You've given us more than enough, Serenity. We will do everything in our power to see the truth out.

(he hesitates)

We must speak to the dead before all else. It is easier to call them up with a member of the family at the Witnessing.

Maia looks over to Idra.

Idra swallows, steeling himself. He fidgets with the black glass beads of a mourning bracelet. He nods.

MAIA

(to Thara)

We will come.

43 OMITTED 43

 

44 INT. VERVEN'THEILEIAN - MIDDAY 44

A meeting of the Corazhas, the usual SQUABBLING.

Maia at the head of the table, nohecharei and Aisava in their usual places.

A gap where Thara would typically sit; a spare cup in Aisava's tea set.

BERENAR

Serenity, surely you agree a ban on news-reporting is an oppressive and unreasonable response to any moral shortcomings of the newspapermen.

Maia refocuses on the debate. Before him are a handful of newspapers and broadsheets, all featuring reactionary headlines——DID EDREHASIVAR PLAN THE CRASH?, MERVANENS FARMSTEAD RAZED BY BARBARIANS, FOUR MARNEI ARRESTED IN PHOTOGRAPHY CASE, SOUTHERN BORDER-TOwNS AT GREAT RISK——and political cartoons which are offensive at best and lese-majesty at worst. He sifts through the pages.

At screen right, Chavar watches Maia with a predator's gaze.

MAIA

We see treason, bigotry, lies. Where do newspapermen report news?

BERENAR

Lord Deshehar is cherry-picking the worst possible examples, Serenity. The people deserve to——

45 INT. ARCHDUCHESS'S PARLOR - EVENING 45

INEBRIATED SCHOLAR

——know what goes on in their communities! What is to say this proposed Office of Censorship will not simply funnel propaganda to the principalities? And who is next, after the newspapermen? The operaneisei? Does our nation no longer value the freedom of expression?

BESPECTACLED LADY

(laughing)

He says, sitting in Vedero Drazhin's parlor, of all places! Mer nohecharis! Shall our loose-tongued friend here be dragged off to the reveth-atha?

Maia sits on the fringes of another conversation, nursing a cup of tea in both hands while Vedero and a WELL-DRESSED SCHOLAR fiddle with the knobs of a fine brass telescope on her balcony. The FIRST SOLDIER-NOHECHARIS, however, faces out towards the politically-inclined courtiers, and he has been listening.

FIRST SOLDIER-NOHECHARIS

No, Dach'osmerrem. Not unless he intends to commit treason.

CSETHIRO

Surely in that case he would earn the kiss of a sunblade, no?

The sunblade Csethiro wears at her hip atop her skirts is ancient, and very sharp.

At the sound of Csethiro's voice, Maia looks up from his tea. He takes up much less space with neither Thara nor Csoru at his side. He watches Csethiro from across the room.

BESPECTACLED LADY

Ah, but Dach'osmin, he cares so for the plight of the commons! Surely he would repudiate that ancestral right.

One of Csethiro's companions whispers into her ear. Suddenly, her head turns, and she stares at Maia directly.

Maia turns away.

45A INT. ARCHDUCHESS'S PARLOR - LATER 45A

Maia sits alone on the couch in the corner.

Csethiro approaches, two glasses in hand. She offers one to Maia.

CSETHIRO

Brandy?

MAIA

No thank you. We do not drink.

The noise of a SHUTTER.

Csethiro shrugs, then puts both glasses on the side table opposite Maia's place on the couch. She moves to sit down beside him.

The nohecharei stiffen.

FIRST SOLDIER-NOHECHARIS

Your sword, Dach'osmin.

CSETHIRO

Oh! Right.

She unfastens her sword-belt and hands it off to the nohecharis. She sits down.

MAIA

Is fashion? Or do you fight?

CSETHIRO

We fence, Serenity. So neither, really. It is sport. We have never had occasion to win a duel.

Csethiro takes a sip of brandy, all swagger.

Maia grins.

MAIA

You are confident you win, then.

CSETHIRO

Entirely. I win nine matches in ten, and that's playing fair. In a duel I wouldn't be so foolish. What of you, Serenity? Do you fence?

MAIA

Ah, no.

CSETHIRO

What of cards?

Maia grimaces a little.

CSETHIRO

We can teach. And then you can have yet another game in which you are the superior player.

MAIA

Ah, we are not so certain, Dach'osmin.

CSETHIRO

Nonsense. You will have beginner's luck at the very least. We imagine Noranamaro must be particularly fond of the Drazhada.

MAIA

(laughs)

Is fair point.

He extends his hand across the couch towards her. Csethiro looks down at his hand in confusion——

MAIA

We are Maia Drazhar, prelate to Mother of the Sure-Footed.

CSETHIRO

A pleasure, Othala.

She shakes his hand, grin transforming her dour expression. She is beautiful, and Maia is aware of it.

The moment drags long.

MAIA

What is word, ah... mix cards together?

CSETHIRO

To shuffle?

MAIA

Yes. You shuffle, please.

She does so gladly as she explains the game.

CSETHIRO

This one is called 'Cynicism'. It uses a Barizheise deck, which means we take out the eights, nines, and tens. It can be played as a partner game——up to five teams of two——or as we play it now.

With a quick, firm flick of her wrist, she deals three cards to both herself and Maia.

CSETHIRO

It starts with putting a single card face-up, as so:

The Osmerrem of Roses reveals herself.

CSETHIRO

Auspicious start.

Close in on the card, on the elven woman surrounded by twelve flourishing roses. She lays curled up on the bed of brambles, though her tiny, hand-painted face suggests a sense of acceptance.

TIME HAS PASSED when we look back up. Each has a large hand of cards; in her other hand, Csethiro nurses a brandy——her second, the other glass empty on the floor at her feet——which she must juggle to play her next card.

She is in a comfortable sprawl, legs crossed at the knee and an elbow propping her up on the arm of the couch.

CSETHIRO

No, no, you win that round. Three is worth ten, remember?

MAIA

Oh.

He is confused, but accepts it. He adds the cards to his hand.

CSETHIRO

It is strange to see you so... alone. Abandoned by the Celehada?

MAIA

Word is strong, but...

He shrugs.

Csethiro nods. She appears to consider her next words carefully, only to throw away her caution all at once.

CSETHIRO

Csoru is using you, Serenity.

MAIA

For?

CSETHIRO

For power! Influence? Does it matter?

MAIA

She is Zhasanai. Both of these things, she has already. We cannot give more. Less, perhaps, to be our friend. We cannot marry her. Fearing scandal, we do not even bring her into household, though she is kin and she is lonely.

CSETHIRO

Csoru will bring scandal down upon herself whatever you do. She always has. And to call her 'friend'! She speaks of cultivating you, Serenity. She wears you like a badge of her own talents.

Maia nods along. If this is news to him, he gives no sign.

MAIA

Csoru is... strong personality. But she is kind, in her way, even when it hurts her. She takes her cousin into her household when he is disowned, against wishes of her father. She helps us much, when no one can pretend is for sake of her late husband's wishes, and if she thinks she is gardener...

(he shrugs)

Matters not. She is our first friend.

CSETHIRO

(at a loss)

Serenity...

MAIA

We thank you for warning, for we know it is well meaning. We promise, does not hurt our friendship.

CSETHIRO

'Our...'? Serenity, really.

Maia's expression shutters..

CSETHIRO

I... That is... Pray do not take us to mean we want nothing to do with you. We greatly value your acquaintance! But please do not play the courtier with us. We get enough of that from everyone else.

MAIA

We... we do not understand.

CSETHIRO

I mean... (SHE LAUGHS, FRUSTRATED) We've barely spoken. You cannot expect us to believe that you consider us a friend.

Though his face remains still as stone, Maia cannot keep his ears from falling.

Csethiro's cheeks turn a brilliant shade of pink.

MAIA

(with a tight smile)

We apologise.

He stands.

MAIA

Hour grows late. Good night, Dach'osmin Ceredin.

His nohecharei trail behind him as he makes his exit.

CSETHIRO

Wait! I——

As she rises from the couch, Csethiro STUMBLES OVER HER WORDS. She knocks over her glass, spilling brandy across the table——and her skirts.

By the time she looks up, Maia is gone.

46 INT. ROSE ROOM - EVENING 46

Csoru sighs.

CSORU

Much as I regret to say it, thou must marry her.

She and Idra pick grapes from a bowl, Csoru on the couch and Idra on the floor. Dazhis Athamaza is present once more, this time in his office as nohecharis.

Maia idly peels a grape with his thumb.

MAIA

(grimacing)

Must I?

CSORU

Maia. Do not pretend to me 'twould be a hardship. Thou'rt fond of her, plain as day.

MAIA

And? I am fond of thee and Idra! I am fond of thy cousin, and my nohecharei, and Mer Aisava!

Aisava looks up from a great pile of papers on the slim roll-top desk in the corner of the room, for the imperial secretary's work is never done. His face and tone are perfectly blank, but his ears are bright pink.

AISAVA

We are honoured to be held so highly in Your Serenity's esteem. Lord Pashavar inquires after Your Serenity's availability for an evening meal. Is the twenty-third suitable?

MAIA

Eugh. Having no way out? Yes, is suitable.

CSORU

'It is suitable', how many times must I tell thee? And thou canst not marry me, or my cousin, or Mer Aisava, many as his virtues surely are——

AISAVA

Thank you, Zhasanai.

CSORU

——and every other eligible lady of the Court either reviles thee, or thou she. Dach'osmin Ceredin is the only reasonable choice.

MAIA

...Thank thee, Csoru.

(he sighs)

Thinkst she would agree?

IDRA

Maia...

CSORU

Even Csethiro is not so brash as to turn down the emperor's proposal. So yes, we think she will find Edrehasivar perfectly agreeable.

MAIA

But the same cannot be said for——

A DRAZHADEISE PAGEBOY enters before Maia can finish. The pageboy presents a single letter to Maia with a bow.

THARA (V.O.)

(in Barizhin)

To His Serenity Edrehasivar VII, greetings and loyal good wishes.

47 INT. AMALEISE OPERA HOUSE - EVENING 47

Thara Celehar has tucked himself into the corner of a set of box seats. The other chair is empty. He writes by the light of the stage, half-peering and half-squinting at the letter as he pens it.

THARA (V.O.)

(in Barizhin)

The course of our investigation has led us to, of all places, the Opera. We write to you from one of Amalo's many opera houses, where The Siege of Tekharee provides an achingly inappropriate score for what we have discovered.

Some onstage cue catches his attention, inaudible to the viewer. He takes up his pair of opera-glasses and looks into the wings of the stage.

The stage itself features two individuals in the finest, gaudiest costume imaginable. Behind them, a STAGE HAND (female, ambiguously elven, notably dressed down in comparison to figures on stage) moves through the wings.

THARA (V.O.)

(in Barizhin)

Before we continue, we ask you to forgive us if the ensuing dramatics read less as a report from Witness to Petitioner and more as a tale intended for the stage.

The Stage Hand looks back over her shoulder before slipping through a door backstage.

THARA (V.O.)

(in Barizhin)

In our current circumstance, truth may be as fantastical as fiction.

48 INT. OPERA HOUSE HALLS - CONTINUOUS 48

We follow the Stage Hand as she navigates the unintuitive halls beneath the opera house. She holds her head high, her posture as controlled as that of any Dach'osmin.

THARA (V.O.)

(in Barizhin)

It is within the labyrinthine underbelly of the Amaleise opera industry that we have uncovered some great scheme of questionable purpose.

The Stage Hand passes by several costumers and other such attendants to the Opera. She maintains her excellent composure even as she tips her head to acknowledge them.

THARA (V.O.)

(in Barizhin)

While the wealthy of Amalo tend to their expensive fancies, a growing collective of workers conduct their business some few yards beneath them.

Finally, she turns into another doorway where we see——

49 INT. UNDER-OPERA MEETING ROOM - CONTINUOUS 49

——a roomful of airmen, manufactory workers, and fellow stage hands. They greet her warmly, waving her inward.

We also see Thara Celehar, now disguised in the shabby, half-burnt clothes of an airman, his curly hair in a worker's crop. He sits somewhat primly in the back, surrounded by his rough and burly fellows.

THARA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

(in Barizhin)

The operahouse's director is known for his radical sympathies, and allows secret meetings——attended by all manner of political malcontents——to be held in the back of house.

The worker next to Thara claps him on the back. The force nearly sends him flying.

THARA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

(in Barizhin)

In pursuit of learning more about the Wisdom of Choharo's final flight, we have taken on temporary employment in the refitting department of the Amal-Athamareise Airship company, where nearly every worker seems able to quote Curnar by heart.

INSERT - Posters advertising work at the A3.

THARA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

(in Barizhin)

Our ignorance of their ideology was quick to earn us an invitation to one of these meetings. We found there a great deal of in-fighting——between men and women, between elves and Barizheisei, between the irreligious and the devout, between pacifists and self-styled revolutionaries.

Close on NARCHANEZHEN (elf, late twenties, cropped hair) as she passes a cup of water to our stagehand. The two gossip in the corner of the room. The stagehand brightens, but Narchanezhen's expression remains distinctly sour.

THARA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

(in Barizhin)

Among these last, several individuals have caught our eye. They cannot all be embroiled in some grand conspiracy, for they cannot stand each other well enough for that. Many are likely guilty of no more than speaking ill of the dead...

In another corner of the room, BRACHELNAR (elf, twenties, burn-scarred) and SHULIVAR (half-Barizheise, twenties, stick-thin) stand apart from the crowd, watching. Their conversation is apparently so secret that they turn to murmur in one another's ears.

Brachelnar hands Shulivar a folded sheet of paper. His eyes scan the page rapidly, then he turns to Brachelnar to respond. Whatever the news, he seems pleased.

THARA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

(in Barizhin)

...But others seem to know more than they tell, and do more than they brag about to their fellows.

The finest-dressed man in the room is OLORA (elf, thirties, physically imposing), his hair worn long and pinned up with tashins, his face made up for the stage lamps. He flits around the room, speaking with many——and always leaning close, a hand upon each zhornu's shoulder.

Everyone he speaks to is an elven man.

THARA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

(in Barizhin)

One such man is an operaneisa we first found skulking about in the airship yard...

50 EXT. FOOD CART NEAR THE A3 - EVENING 50

His face streaked with dirt, Thara is among the many airmen scarfing down a half-zashan wrap as soon as the Company lets them go for the night. He sits on the pavement beside a FRIENDLY ASHENIN (Barizheise, thirties) as he eats, but something distracts him from their conversation.

THARA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

(in Barizhin)

...in clothes that, in retrospect, may have been costumes stolen from his employer.

In front of them, Olora walks by, now in his airman's disguise, but there is no dirt on his face and hands. His arm wrapped around Brachelnar's shoulders, the two men are deep in conversation.

Thara frowns.

On the brick wall behind him is a faded poster for Zhelsu——"Opera as you have never seen it before!"——with an artist's depiction of Olora looming over a young Barizheise woman.

THARA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

(in Barizhin)

When we recognised his face in advertisement posters, we wondered what business a man like him could have with airmen...

51 INT. OPERA HOUSE HALLS - EVENING 51

Intermission. Well-to-do patrons in finery gather in the halls to purchase candied nuts and brandy.

Olora, in costume, weaves through the crowd before slipping through a door branded with the seal of the Tethimada.

Thara watches from a distance.

THARA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

(in Barizhin)

...A thought which was echoed when we discovered him sneaking into the boxes of important opera-goers during intermission, including the Cambeshada and Tethimada.

what an unfortunate cameo for thee!

52 EXT. OPERAHOUSE SERVICE ENTRANCE - NIGHT 52

An unmarked and unremarkable door in a brick facade opens, letting out a flood of warm gaslight. A stream of revolutionaries exit.

Many leave in clusters, embroiled in arguments——some friendly, others not. Thara walks alone into the night, lost in thought.

THARA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

(in Barizhin)

Whatever game he plays, we are not yet privy to it. And he is far from the only one with suspect motivations.

He pauses beneath a streetlamp to shuffle through his pockets. After a moment, he procures a slip of paper.

THARA (V.O.) (CONT'D)

(in Barizhin)

Strategy, tragedy, treason. In the thick of it all, we continue to find ourself deeply grateful that we are your piece, Serenity. We shall progress the board as you see fit.

Now at a distance, Thara and his streetlamp are but a small spot of white against a backdrop of shadow. We do not see what the paper reads, only that he appears to strike something from a list. He walks off.

We linger on the empty street for just a beat too long.

53 INT. CERADADA APARTMENTS - SITTING ROOM - AFTERNOON 53

Csethiro falls flat onto the couch. She stares up at the ceiling, a letter clutched in her hand.

Immediately, her family crowds around her. All but the Brother-in-Law are present.

YOUNGEST SISTER

But what does it say?

ROSIEST SISTER

Not fair! Let us read it, too!

CEREDARAN

Girls! Give her space! That means you, too, Dach'osmer!

CEREDEL

But darling! It is from the emperor!

The Loudest crouches down beside her.

LOUDEST SISTER

Csethiro, my beloved sister. Might I please see thy letter?

Csethiro closes her eyes. She holds the letter out for the Loudest to snatch up.

LOUDEST SISTER

'To Dach'osmin Csethiro Ceredin, greetings: We fear this must be strange and awkward for you, as it is for... us...'

She gasps, and her hand flies up to her mouth.

YOUNGEST SISTER

What next?

CEREDEL

Canst not simply leave it there, my dear girl!

ELDEST SISTER

Oh, give it here.

She grabs the letter from the Loudest Sister.

ELDEST SISTER

Dach'osmin Ceredin, greetings... strange and awkward... 'We are sorry for that. We wish to be a good'——Oh!

CEREDEL

A good what? A good what?!

The Youngest peeks over the Eldest's elbow to see:

YOUNGEST SISTER

Husband! Csethiro's going to be married!

CEREDEL

Husband——!

Ceredel clutches at his heart.

CEREDARAN

Darling, I beg thee sit! Recall what the Csaiveiso said!

CEREDEL

Sit? My Csethiro is to be Zhasan! I cannot possibly sit!

CEREDARAN

But it is not official as of yet.

ELDEST SISTER

She's right. This isn't a proposal, but rather an apology for a proposal to come. Sit, Father, and spare thyself the coronary stress until necessary.

Csethiro's Brother-in-Law enters the room, another letter in hand. On the wall behind him, a cuckoo clock.

BROTHER-IN-LAW

Ceredel! A letter to you from Edrehasivar. What business have you with His Serenity?

The Ceredada stare at him for one brief moment before they descend upon him like a flock of gulls.

Ceredel takes the letter, lightheaded as he beholds Edrehasivar's seal, the monstrous progeny of the Drazhadeise cat and Sevraseched sea serpent. Finally, he breaks the wax.

The Loudest Sister, still on the floor beside the couch, looks up at Csethiro.

LOUDEST SISTER

Dost not seem so thrilled, Csethiro Zhasan.

CSETHIRO

He says he is sorry.

LOUDEST SISTER

'We ask you to tell us when we offend or wound you, for we will not do so purposely, but only out of ignorance.' Yes, that was strange.

CSETHIRO

But I am the one who has wounded him.

LOUDEST SISTER

Oh?

CSETHIRO

He called me his friend. And I told him I could not believe that.

LOUDEST SISTER

Ouch.

CSETHIRO

I know.

LOUDEST SISTER

So... saidst something to offend the man. And then he goes and proposes marriage to thee?

CSETHIRO

...Yes?

LOUDEST SISTER

Take heart then, Csethiro! Hast found thy perfect match!

Csethiro hits her sister with a decorative pillow.

54 EXT. OPERAHOUSE SERVICE ENTRANCE - NIGHT 54

The door opens. Faintly from within, we can hear The Siege of Tekharee's sombre FINALE, the goblin army discovering the elves's self-slaughtered sons and daughters.

Thara Celehar, once again wearing his airman's disguise, pauses just past the door frame, speaking to someone unseen behind him.

THARA

——cannot thank you enough for your help, Mer Pel-Thenhior. You will send the letter straightaway?

A pause, the other speaker inaudible.

THARA

You as well. Good night, and——and stay safe.

The door CLOSES, then a BAR falls into place on the opposite side.

We pull back slowly as Thara walks towards screen left...

55 INT. SOUNDSTAGE - CONTINUOUS 55

...leaving the small set and heading down what we understand to be a side street in the dead of night. He passes small garbage bins and other small props on an otherwise empty soundstage.

Dim light from overhead, stage lamps on barely-visible rails.

Our view obscured: the kameraman twisting off the red filter on the lens. We are nearly blinded by the newly glaring Pel-Thenhior bulbs of a day-for-night shoot, revealing a MENACING ELF looming behind Thara.

He claps a hand holding a rag over Thara's mouth, muffling an ALARMED CRY.

Thara tries to fight him off, but he is a small man, and even if he could fight off his attacker, he inhales ether with every panicked gasp.

His struggles cease. The Menacing Elf lifts an unconscious Thara like a sack of rice over his shoulder. He walks towards screen right and the kamera rig, closer and closer until he disappears from our view.

Our last sight of Thara is his slack face, jostled by the Menacing Elf's every step.

An empty soundstage, silent.

One by one the lights SHUT OFF.


To Be Continued...